I am not really a fan of male pov books this is actually my first time and I woikd say it was quite an experience . it is an explosive journey through a tumultuous world. The author's vivid descriptions and well-crafted characters immerse you in a chaotic and unpredictable landscape. As the story unfolds, you'll find yourself on the edge of your seat, eager to uncover the next twist in this thrilling narrative. If you crave action and suspense this book won't disappoint.
I really love the "you get stronger when you die" part, but God this novel is awful. As far as I read I saw that it's going the harem route so... there's gonna be no story progression whatsoever. Well now about characters. MC is bland, extremely boring. He's supposed to have extremely high intelligence (as of now about 200-300x normal human) but he's acting like a stupid child with autism. The other characters don't really have any personality. The vampire girls father doesn't like her dating the mc (he's supposed to be insanely strong and old) so he kills him 1 time and the girl says he's immortal so the father lets him date her? Well the world is crap. The supernatural lived in the city thousands of years and not a single normal human saw anything. Well overall it's just trash
its been a nice read so far, i can tell something big is ahead
definitely a pancakeswitch novel,need I say more???????????????????????????????????????????????
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Fantastic book. One of the best I've seen on the site. The world building is excellent and terrifying. There's some deep plot happening here in the background. Please vote for this so we find out what happens!!!
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The whole story of him becoming the GOAT is wrong for the simple and mere fact that he doesn't have the talent or the qualities for it, he simply has the armor of the plot behind him so that his footballing abilities are randomly raised and the other players' abilities are lowered. With hard work he is not going to become one of the best and in his previous life it was already proven that he does not have an outstanding talent, he could not even play in a lower level team of the 5 major leagues. How do you think that without talent or a system he can become the best? Also, the story contains NTR and on certain occasions the author seems to be undecided whether he prefers Mylo or Jason.
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This story has potential, but with how bad the grammar and editing skill are, I'm going to drop this novel.1. Poorly written character development.2. World background is original, but the author isn't "creative" about it.3. Writing quality is bad, it's like I'm reading a 6th grader's essay that was rushed because they procrastinated until the last minute.
Ahem, is this a potential BL story? I think it’s if you could, you should shove the BL plot line in this story. It will be very successful. Btw, I haven’t read the novel yet, so idk if both of them are the same sex or not. But if it is so, then make it BL. Sincerely, from an immortal fujoshi~