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I've only read 3 chapters so far and gonna put it on hold for now but can any one spoil me a bit.. what chapter can he actually control his body properly..just i hate it.. i feel like im reading a person stuck in viewer mode in a body.
thank you for your hard work it needs more refining but it is good.............................................................................................
Is this an mtl or by is it translated by someone.
pretty slow paced if you ask me,I'm the kinda person that lives for the thrill it might get better later on but the training is taking too much time in my opinion
I quite like it. Its a nice story and it can definitely be good as the story progresses. Its a good base building story and is has a very quick pace.
An excellent foundation. A specific format of text should be used for the interaction between him and the system. Hopefully he'll be able to call upon a skill exclusive to pets after a significant evolution. It would be great if mc will be able to fight as well.
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I really like that there's a logical reason that there's a system in this. It's pleasant to read despite the few small errors and occasional things that make me go hmm. ;)I like the characters so far. There are dozens of reviews here that say things more eloquently, but, it's fun and deserves the little stars.
interesting..............................
Great story..felt as if I know the character..his feelings as if it were of someone I know close enough.. waiting for more..hope soon enough I get read and enjoy more...
A good novel, writing quality is excellent. But I would say a bit more world background would make the novel a very good choice. Over all, a new novel that would catch your attention very fast.