Dream_Lord14
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For the love of god and everything you believe or don't believe in: don't be foolishly swayed like I was by the water army who sings praises to this novel. It starts out decievingly well and has a good premise, and manages to go strong for a little while before brazely dropping the act and showing its true colors.
Quick summary: mc is an incomprehensible moron who gets praised to highest heaven as the Supreme Genius Stragegist for having a half-decent/obvious plan once in a blue moon; as for the other 99,99% of the screentime he whiteknights around collecting bimbos in distress, getting his arse handed to him EVERY. SINGLE. TIME., only to be bailed out by unexplained coincidense / "awakened instincts" that are never mentioned again / enemies suddenly gaining a new set of chromosomes in exchange for half of their IQ / convenient moment of luckyness / deus ex machina (this time literally) / plot armor / a random loli that in a single second gains more power than mc ever had and finishes off a boss with a single lvl.1 fireball (yes, seriously).
Have mercy on your nerve endings and spleen, just don't read it.
I read this but I really can't understood how mc still immature even he reincarnated hundred times.
I though he will quite scheming person and cunning but it doesn't feel to me.
There's also mistakes in typos and some grammar
Love Reading it, Writing is good, character development is also good, what was happening in the world was relevant but not too much that the MC was overshadowed by it the designs looked cool (Might snag one XD)
Nice story development... storyline too.✌️ I think you forget about background settings. Anyway, nice to read.
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Thanks like the story and "oscar" is funny his Sausage spirit and kitchen knife are a good combination also oscar's joke about his spirit incantation was really funny
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the history is funny and has a good quality of writing, but the frequency of updates is something that makes you onder if the history is even going to be uploaded again?
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The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
I'm confused, how is this story magical realism. I've read all the way to chapter 39 so it can not possibly be because of slow start. Author are lying to us?
