Character Design no al, 1-145 chapter in mc is still a much stupider simp. bottom of the world not al......................................................................................................................................................................................................
A good novel. The mc has suffered a bit and has gone through the trial to become an mc and passed it successfully. The Female Lead that has been introduced (The first one-Scarlet) has been developed but still has the potential to improve. I also liked how that trash Young-Master was killed.An Interesting novel for sure
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honestly biako it's a good story.. as rotul fan I love your writing style hope you don't make this an average cultivation novel. looking forward to see something new
First 'real' review here.First of all.Writing Quality: There are a few mistakes here and there, but overall it is readable with little to no difficulty. The mistakes are not that common either, but even then one could read the novel without issue. So 4 * is a good rating.Stability of Updates: So far I have seen 1-2 chapters per day, which is consistent. Nothing bad about that.Story Development: Typical cultivation novel, but even then the power realms ain't the same bs as 'body tempering' or some bs. The realms are huge and the apex realm is called 'Grand Paragon' not some bs. The apex realm in novel can literally make the heavenly laws shake and welcome 'its ruler.' So I have no issue with this either.Character Design: MC ain't bland, he has a life story and is nothing about that 'control my own fate' bs. He knows he is weak and isn't actively trying to find a way to cultivate because he knows he can't. Or can he? The wife is the most adorable thing I have read, she is cold to others but very overprotective over her husband. Their relationship develops quite well with a lot of funny interactions. The other side characters are also pretty interesting. They have their own role to play, and although there is some mystery to some characters it is slowly revealed.World Background: FANTASTIC!! Different Universes or 'realms' are part of the novel. Each universe has its own things and of course they are at odds with each other. The Empire and world is greatly worked on. How the apex cultivators control the universes and protect them is also great. I really have no issue with the novel besides the short chapters and occasional grammar mistake. Keep it up!
Good piece of work. I love how it's in the first person format. I can really feel his feelings better and it's more relatable. Something tells me those gods aren't as good as they seem tho, or is it just me?
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Posted by the editor, ErwinCloude.Hello everyone.I'd like to clarify some things as I've read a comment on chapter 1 in regards to a lack of logic and how some things don't make sense.Firstly, this novel is created mainly from the author's, Novel Man, imagination and some input from myself here and there, meaning he will write things that he obviously likes and think people will enjoy in this novel. So don't expect everything to be completely logical or for everything to reflect reality. It's a fantasy novel after all, what's the point of reading fantasy if everything is exactly the same as in real life? Thus, we will make some things fantastical or different from what you'd normally expect. Secondly, I feel like a distinction needs to be made between two types of logic, Universal Logic and Book Lore Logic. Mind you, these are terms I just thought up, so don't take them too seriously lol.Universal Logic is, as the name implies, universal. Meaning it's unchanging and is naturally apparent to anyone reading a book. For example, as a certain someone once said, people die when they are killed :D or being caught lying is bad. These are natural things we've all seen or experienced ourselves enough, to know them to be true. So, they remain true in a fictional world as well..... in most cases lol.Whereas Book Logic, is completely based upon the author's imagination, meaning it all relies upon the rules and laws decided by the creator of a fictional world. For instance, tamers holding a small world inside their dwelling which gives them cosmic powers.So, when something strange happens, don't immediately assume it's bad, a plot hole or a slip up by the author. It can often times be based on the book's internal logic. The rules that enforce it are often made obvious in the beginning parts of a book, so a reader should judge the happenings of the story by those rules, assuming there's been enough time to set them all up. Sometimes, some of these rules are made purposefully vague with some hints here and there, for the purpose of cultivating a sense of mystery and intrigue for the reader. In which case, we hope the readers will be patient :D.Although, obviously this book has only begun, so we hope the readers can be patient for now until most of the core rules are revealed as even we're only at the beginning of the story. Additionally, as we're new to this, we'll naturally make some mistakes here and there in the beginning, so we ask for readers to be understanding.With all of that said, we hope you'll enjoy the journey of Akash and his friends. Please be kind in the comments and if you have any constructive criticism, express it in a clam and clear manner, so we can address it and learn from it. Thank you all for reading this :D.If you like this novel, don't forget to comment your thoughts, vote with those precious power stones and leave a review :).If need be, you can also contact us on discord, link provided in the synopsis.
The story is getting worse as it progresses.MC was cautious and smart at the start, then he became dumber as the story progressed. He became dumbest when he got a companion fairy. Then he forgot almost all his gaming knowledge.Earlier when he thought that death was permanent, he was fine killing fellow humans. Later he found out it was only temporary, now he spares other humans.His personality also changed. Now he likes showing off and not finishing the fights quickly.I stuck so far because i liked the starting. I still think it would have been an excellent story if the author didn't purposely made it worse. To keep the story excellent all he had to do was make the MC's character consistent. Was is too much to ask for?
Ignore the first two reviews for this. Their writers are even more confused than they are making their readers. This novel is just as it is written in the description. It's also, as one would expect, hilarious and light-hearted.
good story, character development is also good. Update is very slow . it's more than a half and a year but still we got only sixty chapters .
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