writerprimordial
Finally an update....
I loved the story, even if the FL annoyed me at times. BUT, it seems unfinished. So many plot points not explained. What happened with the royals, and Desert Sun. Did they give up on Aedelia? How did the endremetriosis get cured? What happened with Albert and Mariposa?
119 chapters 4-12-24
Very nice novel!
There were way too many grammatical errors for the story to make sense. I couldn’t keep reading it
great book.
Any idea when you will give more chapters? Maybe you will write all and post it all at once?!?!
Can we get more than one chapter a day??? Just asking
i love you prachi ...
Great story and witting with a lot of detailed backstory but I find the constant back and forth to of different pov of the past annoying. It’s the 4 book but only 3 weeks ish into the present storyline line. Talen’s backstory should be a sepat
your book is really good I love it, please more update
The two stories are nice and entertaining, but the second one has some grammatical errors that makes difficult to understand to what each character is really conveying and referring to.
