Dawn_Potter
Loved it. You did a great job. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing with us all
This, so far, is my favourite book. Thank you Muse for the lollipops
lovely book to make someone feel wondering in the clouds
i love the story
Up to chapter 25, and so far, it's been great. The main lead (ML) is one of those pure characters who gradually succumbs to his desires. The female lead (FL) is a typical work-focused protagonist who isn't fazed by the male lead's intimate issues. Her straightforward approach is quite charming.
There are a few clichés, like them being set up in an isolated place which forces them together, but it's not too overdone. The intimate scenes have been quite well-handled and feel like two people figuring things out together. Most of it is consensual, though the first encounter is a bit different because the potion the ML takes has adverse side effects, leaving him with little control over his lust. However, the FL is careful to check in with him as she begins "treating" his condition. By the second time, it's clear he's fully on board, and the story starts to delve deeper into more intense intimate scenes around chapter 20.
It’s Chapter 355 but I recommend reading the stuff leading up to it
This Novel is not for everybody. First of MC is not really a demon, he might be crazy at some time, but he never touches someone who did nothing to me. And lastly, no romance!!
What a great ride... Shame it has ended... But wonderful story!!!
I miss this this story
Becomes terrible by the tag man to woman
poison taste test up to chapter 632: The story and plot is much better than the sm*t. The issue with the sm*t is it's all foreplay with no penetration play really. author will write an entire chapter of foreplay, c*nn*l*ng*s, finger, kissing and stuff but once MC penetrates the sm*t ends within 2-4 lines the same way every time. it's like getting blue balled by a story. The plot is honestly top tier, plus this has a prequal called Demon Lord's succubus (very dark with rape, non-consensual bdsm and stuff) The Incubus System doesn't have this stuff (besides rape-backstory(its mentioned once) and consensual BDSM) so you are fine. It also has a shared universe with the story Dragon King's harem. My biggest issue putting aside the sm*t is the release rate of chapters, it is only around 10 a month. author is already at like chapter 920 on his Patreon so it will take like 2 years to catch up lol, which is fine since we are reading for free but sounds kind of ridiculous if you think about it.
New chapters!! FINALLY I CAN READ ABOUT THE MAN WITH BIRDRIZZ AGAIN
