NemesisWriter
nice one...finally a happy ending...
Your writing is captivating and thought-provoking, leaving me eagerly anticipating your next masterpiece. waiting for the next chapter shamelessly hehehe.
good work . Ash n Rick they do deserve good ending
Beautiful read. Glad to see a book where the fl is not weak.
Can we just sit with the fact that Jiang He stood there holding a teapot, watching the man she cares about balance on towering roof beams, and she couldn't even confront him? She asked Lu Changgeng about his pay—fifty copper coins a day, five taels of silver bonus—and then she just turned around and left. No drama, no scene. Just quiet devastation. The author writes: 'Her chest felt unbearably heavy.' That's it. That's all we get. And then the next scene, Xie Zhao comes home and notices she barely touched her food. The oppressive silence. I swear I could feel that silence pressing on my lungs. When she finally tells him she's giving up on the Liang City money and the business, her voice is described as 'still as an ancient well without a ripple.' But then it gets softer, almost imperceptibly tired. Because giving something up hurts. Compromising hurts. But compared to his life? What chance are those dreams? She's eighteen, almost not even eighteen. She tells herself she can wait two years. But I know what she's really saying: I'd rather you live than me succeed. And Xie Zhao? He still doesn't fully get it. He thinks she's just sensitive about being slighted by neighbors. The gap between what she feels and what he understands—that's where the emotional tension lives. It's not dramatic confessions. It's quiet sacrifices and missed connections.
66 chapters 6-23-23
It’s ok but takes to long to read as u set coins to read to dear why don’t u use ads to watch till next chapter
Awesome! Enjoyed every moment of this unique book. Great storyline with strong characters, written well, outstanding twists and turns and held my interest from start to finish. The book did not drag and I really didn’t want it to end. Kudos author will be looking for more of your completed work.
Everything in this book is terrible, the writing, the plot, the characters. Just horrible.
The start seems good...
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it's a good story. highly recommended. nakaka-nose bleed mare HAHAHA
