Can't wait for more I really think that if more people were aware of the 40k worlds this could easily be in the top 20 or even the top 10. The chapters are of a nice size that you get in to it and there is still lots left in the chapter. The grammar it in the top ten of all books on Webnovel and top three for originals. I can see that you have put a lot of effort into this when this is finished I think that it will be just as good as the other 40k books in quality gust like "The Blood Angels omnibus- by James swallow". Thanks I am anticipating more chapters. And I loved the "We" never took notice of it until it was mentioned. Keep writing you are a great writer just keep writing and it will start to be seen more and start to snowball.
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I'm not sure what everyone else who rated this higher is reading, but this is unreadable.Character names get introduced without any context, and lots of sentences don't even make sense.
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C+, decent ideas but feels like an immature wine. Give the author some time develop his writing style and hopefully the quality of the storytelling will improve with it. Check back when it hits 100 chapters. Hopefully it will be binge worthy.
I'm happy this is being rewritten.
ahh, cap 7solo diré 23 cosas 1. trama lenta, en mi opinión.2. protagonista con comportamiento de beta. 3.parece un otaku aunque diga que no lo es.
This is likely the lowest score I've ever given a novel. The translation quality is fine, no issues there. The update schedule is, however shocking for a 3k+ total chapter count. At this point in time the chapters are coming out 1/week which is nearly useless.The story follows a 'This happened so I did this' type writing style. To take an example the MC finds a chain so he grabs it and runs. He finds out the chain is firmly secured to SOMETHING (doesn't check what) so he summons his dragon to pull it. That doesn't work so he does this. Then that happens and he does this. An extraordinarily boring thing to read, at least in my opinion.The character relies on bull**** luck to accomplish everything. His family is rich and his Mom owns the game. Basically this character has the thickest plot armour I've ever seen.
This book is absolutely fantastic and worth reading even though it’s been dropped for a few years now. The irony of a book about a god creating his own super computer system ending on chapter 404 is rather amusing too lol.
yessss you picked this novel , I never lose hope and always believed that this would get picked. and the gods have answered my prayers and for that I spent coins for this novel and not fast pass
Honestly this book sounds great, the idea Behind it is alSo great, But i have to dRop it after a few pages bc the wrIting wuality is....well the easieSt way to descrive it is like this: it seems as though this is the rough draft of the book, paragraphs have missing spaces (not too big of a deal), grammAr is Decent, however i have to ask, does the auThor have an issue with the word “the?” Bc every single sentence or paragraph is misSing the word “the” where it is Beeded. ex: AuThor of the book Made a great book vs the author of the book made a great book. there are nore like this and its everywhere not in some random Places of the book. it makes it really hard to read the book properly and i had to coBstabtly Go back and reread the sEnstences wHile adding the word “the” Into them. im not going to Get rid of the book as i hope the author goes back and Fixed rhese issues, however i wont read it until its fixed.
Havnt read it yet, than u re missing out on hell of a story. Little bit upsetting but awesome story line that shows dark side of human nature in perfect way.