The main thing that you should note about this novel is that the main character is an idiot, not only is he an idiot but he gets progressively dumber as the novel goes on. Now don’t get me wrong I like this novel quite a bit, I’ll always enjoy a good dungeon society/ skill stealing story but the main character is what one would call a battle junky with a bad habit of practically announcing that he has cheat like abilities to everyone and their grandmother.I’d give the world and overall story 5/5But character design / development is a -3/5 for me.
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looking for more chapters don't be lazy . have a good day.
To be honest I came to check it out due to the title to see what kinda chuckery is this but dang the plot is pretty interesting I would recommend it's a good read.
I hope that the author would continue writing, the world building is interesting and there is a potential that the novel would become more interesting as more chapters would come
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The grammar is a little poor yet tolerable, they say a few things on what the character looks like, for world building they say the they building yet never go over the background. For people who have never been there it's hard to picture the surroundings with little detail about it. Other than that the MC has no goals let alone a end goal.
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Light-hearted comedy with a lot of mystery? Yeah, those would be the words I'd use to describe this Web-Novel. If you are looking for the aforementioned I could say this fits your bag. You really aren't given anything ever while everyone keeps on joking through their lives. The characters felt similar to each other a bit too much. (there were exceptions)
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Very interesting! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! Overall it's freakin good!!