So far good enough. A big world filled with many characters. For the first few chapters, the story stretches around for a bit and there was a bit of confusion but, the author managed to plug those plotholes so far. The writing quality needs some improvement but overall interesting plot.
The story is very good. Unlike 99% of the stories on this site, this one is very well written so far. The main protagonist is not brain dead and can think. So far there has been no romance that drags down the story. His system is pretty well done and not annoying. The world background is well told and diverse. Overall a very good read. Keep up with the updates!.
This is a bit different from what I usually read but the Author got me hooked from the prologue ???????? great job Author, well articulated and easy to follow story ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I hate bullies ... di ld you read mine story?? You will get to know what my character had done with them? Btw just came here A WHILE AGO and already loving it.... the story the synopsis everything is amazing can't stop to give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ stars !
Normally I would point out the obvious grammar mistakes and plot holes in the story and some of the stuff that just doesn’t make sensebut this is clearly made for fun and to enjoy a light hearted story. And it does exactly that.
Não vale a pena, história sem sentido, protagonista que é um suposto velho de 200 anos é mais retardado que um adolescente. Nunca li tanta bobagem e Deus ex Machina na minha vida.
Fun and he doesn’t keep a low profile which is the source of much annoyance in other novels.. also his system is heaven defying but he doesn’t immediately recieve the highest level spirit root but has to work at it.. the translation is good if a bit stunted at times but there are no obvious mistakes.. more please
cliche, really full of cliches. You have money yet you still live in a small bedroom, still ride a delivery bike, and still wear delivery uniform even though you bought new clothes ? I know you want faceslapping but this is just stupid and disgusting.
I'm confused who is the mate? Is it Hayden it Bruce? But Bruce and Hayden kind get along, they are like a perfect match I swear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's really good. I'm not into sports from my childhood except cricket but after reading I started loving baseball. The author must be known very well about the game or have done much research on it. And also this book increases curiosity as the author is writing a scene in diff ppl pov. Apart from a few grammatical mistakes, it is really good. The title and the cover perfectly suit the book. If somebody wants to read this but contemplating whether to read it or not. Then I recommend to read it. Trust me guys you won't regret reading it. I hope the author will work harder and keep up with the pace he is going on. Happy reading.
I hope this book is published as soon as possible ❤️
Although I have not really read that much of the story and have skipped most chapters, I still believe my review to be fair. From what I can tell so far, the story likes to make great leaps in logic that does not make any sense. Also the writing quality is pretty bad. I mean how come that the last sentence of every paragraph is missing the "." in every chapter so far?