Could really do with some proof reading. In particular the use of your / you’re ...... If “you are” doesn’t sound right in the sentence you are writing use your. The tenses are terrible too “please take a sit”. Lost in translation?
please update more chapters!! need to know more
amazing update.. waiting for his reaction
I love all the six pack book. Great story line
everything is good about the story but author is forgetting to update it regularly. 1 chapter in a month. it's really disappointing.
beautiful story.. more chapter please
Ngl I cried :'( so glad it's a happy ending! Thank you for writing this
Over two months for an update! Ridiculous! This author is really good…I read the other book they wrote and this one is good but apparently not good enough for the author to feel the need to update. Too bad because it really is good
The is really good. I'm glad to see the jealous is starting to show. Can't wait for them to start realizing they have feelings for each other. It's a really weird how his gf Lauren is starting to show interest now his starting to get close Becca.
Eager to read more..... update soon baby
so far good
I really enjoyed the storyline and the updates. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters and book two!