FantasyBringer
Please at least release 14 or more chapters a week. It is not even added on lnmtl, google translate itself is not that good......…….........................
What that picture doing here?Its a cultivation story....What that picture doing here?Its a cultivation story....What that picture doing here?Its a cultivation story....
Great cover page! Nicely written synopsis, which gives an idea of what to expect from the content. So far the story is interesting, you skillfully take the reader into an unknown, different world. Well done!
I have really enjoyed this book. Story is about a guy who is a human robot hybrid that can control machines. One journey through a wormhole later he discovers a world of magic and dragons goblins etc... MC is a "bit" more overpowered than is strictly necessary (that is one sentence I never thought I would type seriously) overall it has the excitement you would hope for while reading the book description. Pros:overpowered mcGreat writing qualityGreat action scenesCharacters are believableCons:Author makes MC too powerful early in the story I expect to see some classic plot devices later on into the story to make up for this problem.The actual technology building mechanics and in depth planning are somewhat lacking.Overall I found it to be an amazing story definitely worth checking out!
Jake's got it rough: a missing dad, an abusive mother and a hidden talent for baseball which sends his mother off the deep end. Sent to live with a foster family, his love for baseball is revived, and with their help, will Jake start to shine like the future superstar he is? This is a really well written story!
A really good story the only problem is that a DAY in the story is equals to 1 whole arc.. and the mc is kinda stupid likes to tie up his enemy and leave..when it is a apocalypse setting there should be no mercy for the enemy
I have read it a bit before when it was released Planning to start from the start once again. I have asked it before in an old review and will ask it again. Author-san, do you have a fetish for half- elves with red hair and green eyes???
It's a ok history, but the translation is really horrible. Horrible that looks like MTL. MC is hard working but not good with women. It's fast paced with OP MC.
Story and plot is good i hope mc won't be like edgy chinese novel mc's i like how a nice guy he is , and i don't see problem at the overpowered mc good work keep going :)
please be more positive, his life is too tragic before and after. this story is too dark for me
A well written piece. I can’t wait to read more on it. You go girl
The book is good and can't wait to read more! Keep the good work author!
