''The ancestors of the tribe shall come into being to defend the home turf themselves...'' Emperor reassured.
Initially, I thought this was a novel about empire building, but it turns out it's not. However, that doesn't diminish my love for this book in the slightest. The plot is simply brilliant, with each event intricately linked to the next, spanning thousands of years. I've been thoroughly captivated. I'm eager to see the moment when Alexander and Laura reunite to confront the demon together. You're doing a fantastic job, please keep it up!For humanity's last hope, let the City of Hope be great forever!
My favorite novel on the app. 10/10 would recommend. The author actually does historical research, and I learn new history facts almost every chapter!
Just discovered it and I'm already in love Looking forward to more updates plzzzzzz
Amazing story with excellent explanation of things going on around ..........................................................................
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This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 16.This is a reversed transported to another world / reincarnated in another world story. It adds the extra spice of both characters involved in the transit retaining their memories, even though it seems to be one entity rather than two conflicting souls sharing one body.This is a story I'm sad to review, because the whole is less than the sum of the parts. Part by part it's a solid five stars all over, but when put together there are cracks in the picture.It all starts out as a campfire tale, the kind where you, the reader, have to envision yourself sitting at a campfire listening to a wizzened greybeard telling the tale of his youth.Sure there are tense errors that can't be chalked down to the taleteller wavering between the tale in the past and his comments about that past, but they're minor and don't disturb the flow.And it's all wonderfully told from that very special first person point of view.Then we have the transit.Suddenly story-snippets in third person point of view are inserted, and for me this is a big no-no. Deciding to run a story in first person allows the author some leeway when it comes to tenses. As an author you get close and personal with the reader, but it comes at the cost of a smaller world, one limited to what can be experienced by the narrator. Adding third person snippets is cheating.The world transited to isn't modern Earth. It's our far future. So kudos for a great setting. Fantasy land goes visiting space opera.Then things get horribly confusing. Flashbacks all over the place, long sections of third person narration just occasionally interspersed by what the main character experiences, back to the now, next flashback, back to the now, next flashback, and after I while I suffer from temporal car-sickness.Stars.Writing: Four stars. Near perfect langage accompanied by mixing first person and third person point of views randomly inserted in the story.Updates: Five stars. Perfect.Story: Three stars. Each and every single part is a rock solid five star chunk, but when joined together we have an unholy mess.Character: Five stars. No discussion. Superb characterisation.World: Five stars. Same here. Superb depiction of the setting, or in this case, settings.Lastly, this is a tale that should have been told straight for the sake of coherence, but readers should give it a chance, because as soon as the temporal chaos is taken care of you'll be reading one hell of a Sci-Fi story told in all but perfect native English where the very language used have a personality of its own.
Why should you read this story?Aside from it being an entertaining and a time killer, this story blends sci-fi and mystery really well. If you like both of those genres then this book deserves you're attention. Great job author keep it up!!!
honestly not that great wish they would stop putting this in the free to read so often it's like ehh why not that enjoyable and not that interesting story can be nice or drawn out or completely off the topic of the subject
I absolutely love this novel and the characters in it, the interactions are more human than any novel I layed my eyes upon. every character has a personality and they don't exist for the mc, they exist for themselves. the writing and grammar are spectacular and I've seen few on webnovels like it.... but the bad parts are the influence japanese has in everything here, when I read a fantasy, I don't expect Japan or something to be shoved in my face everytime I read a name, especially by the locals, even if the excuse is that there were earthlings being summoned, the novel proved that japanese weren't the only people being summoned, I'm surprised the author didn't make the characters dogeza or bow after every mistake they made... this is just a personal gripe but, in the later chapters, every main character states their reason for winning is from the power of friendship, it's kinda cringey to read adults saying stuff like that even if it's true, overall I would still recommend reading, definitely one of the best novels webnovels has to offer
I'm so confused the author sometimes uses "you" instead of "I" for some reason and the female mc is always called little guy and sometimes chris it's confusing as **** and I for one can't continue reading.story is great tho
I relate to Andrew a lot with how he doesn't want to disappoint his mother, I really look forward to reading more! It's very good story, keep up the good work ♡