The story is truly touching and quite relatable, being awaken from a fake utopia is my type of plot after all. Although I've seen lots of stories of this theme, this one's unique in its own way. The characters are portrayed to be realistic, as well as their actions but reading it is very entertaining.So, the writing quality is well and decent but I believe there are still room for improvement (purely from a reader's pov, I'm not a professional writer either). I suggest you add more descriptions to the dialogues or describe the current scenario in a more detailed manner, to aid with the reader's visualization. There were some grammatical errors but that's totally fine and does not get in the way of understanding the story (I myself commit that most of the time lmao but too lazy to check them), proof reading is the key, YAS. All in all, the slice of life genre was given justice to and that's a big thumbs up! The story development is good and I am looking forward to how it will progress further. Keep it up!
From my perspective, this story reflects real life. There are some people like Lyan Oo who was ready to sacrifice anything for their beloved person. And there're people like Maw Oo who excels in everything they do and fails at love subject. It depicts people are never impeccable and being a person with flaws is perfect. Along with the story, I feel complicated and heartbroken. I'm anticipating the ending of the story.
The novel is just randomly without following any actual plot. I can't just understand how it got this high rating. I can only conclude that we are different and this novel is not to my liking.
Author are you going to finish this story anytime soon? Or at least continue updating and adding more chapters? please let us know what you plan to do.thank you.
This story is actively irritating. The writing is decent, but the author seems to have forgotten that secondary characters can and should have emotions other than adoration towards the mc. While I tend to find harems annoying in general I wouldn't rate a book down for it's choice in genre. But... harems can be a compelling way to tell a lot e story complicated by the number of competitors and complications in a relationship. this doesn't do that. characters are flat and seem to be introduced in their final state with just about zero development. I've only made it to ch 18 so maybe it gets better, however I'm dropping it here as I feel the flaws here are with the foundation, and not the overall story itself. it just feels like the author is feeling up his MC and it makes me uncomfortable.
Keep it going to write good story..i really enjoy it...?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Im not done reading the 1st chapter when I read that the MC (MC is Main Char right?? Thats what always I think when I see MC) has a duaghter I feel this be a good novel well please keep up the good work..
This novel has a great potential but you have your choices and I respect that but I just wanna say that your novel was great and interesting, it's just sad to know that you discontinued it but thanks for the novel man.
Without a doubt, one of my favorite Evil Mc novels would recommend you give it a read you won’t regret it.
OMGGGG!!!!This story is sooo nice.....Thank you for translating this book to english..The book is indeed very hard to find a translation.....Thank you sgsin for making that proccess easy for us...
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Very original and detailed. Very good?????????????????????????????????????????????????????