A mafia beta is scared of 2 year old
Great story
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I like the storyline but the writing style can be improved
This book makes me want to cry and laugh at the same time
The synopsis got me
Loving it already, can't wait for other chapters
83 chapters 5-25-23
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Mediocre story. Subpar setting and world-building, though not particularly egregious. The main character starts out very bland, takes a few odd turns, then solidifies and avoids the harem route, which is refreshing, but ultimately becomes even more bland. The writer isn't extraordinarily skilled, and this is evident in the power mechanics, but everything is solid enough. There are some unexpected twists in how the future knowledge unfolds, to the point where the title is *very* questionable (it’s clear the author didn’t plan the plot twist). One thing that really bothers me is that the author seems to have no understanding of martial arts. The main character constantly complains about how difficult it is to control his power, despite his martial arts realm being focused on nano-level control. His opponents are described as too weak, even though the in-setting power dynamics suggest that fighters should be able to read subtle movements and estimate an opponent's strength from the early stages, and at higher levels, manipulate the fundamental forces of the universe, essentially fighting with their souls. Regardless of their tier, fighters should be able to gauge their opponents' and their own strengths accurately, and the main character’s lack of this ability makes him seem incompetent.
Pros: Relatively fast-paced plot, and no actual harem, even if there are potential romantic interests at every turn.
Cons: Bland protagonist with inconsistent character development, rushed world-building, and very little tension.
, it's readable, but not particularly novel in any way.
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Your comment was quite lackluster
The Author's POV and The Novel's Extra
To anyone who reads this, OMG this is a hidden gem, im chapter 3 and the banter, world building, im loving it. Def a book written for me to enjoy.