Just same mold as castle of black iron.got a attribute changing system instead of castle of black iron.slow story and world development.poor boy getting rich,weak to strong, finding new function of system,hidden dangers..just like castle of black iron.no harrem until now.i don't know why other people rated low.it just 18 chapters.just like other translated novel story just started.may be it's because of original novel most of them have story/world development almost completed at 18 chapters.the important news is premium didn't started in this novel
OMG BEEN WAITING FOR THIS SINCE 1 YEAR LETS GOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Webnovel......This trial read system is now officially a failure.Both the novels picked against this gem have LESS TOP FANS than this.I don't know on what basis the novels get picked, but I must say this...I'm so much disappointed in Webnovel right now.Btw when I saw this in the morning, it was showing this novel was picked. Now it isn't even in the trial read section.This is my first novel review in a really long time, I didn't really imagine I'd be typing this kind of review on this novel. That must tell you how much disappointed I am in Webnovel in the way they handled this.This sucks man, this truly sucks...
Worth reading for a while but occasionally you get multiple chapters where the names of certain objects, techniques, alliances, or countries change drastically.I can't even remember if Meng Chong uses a knife, saber, or blade anymore, and have stopped trying to figure it out.Dahua becomes Great WildsDemon Lord becomes Magic LordEvery time the reading gets fun and exciting a glaring error appears and detracts from it. The MTL is lazy and inconsistent.The writing and characters are fun though.
Translation is done really well, and the story is pretty entertaining. Nothing really to complain just a couple small things here and there not worth mentioning
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 02/04/2021 @chap28 (released chap till date: 39)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: A good SOL novel. Maybe Dark SOL? Mc ain't dense and pussy unlike most SOL novels. Badass mc with likeable daughter.long review: pros: 1) A good SOL novel. Basic concept similar to most novels though the execution of the plot is entertaining2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) A badass, savvy & OP mc. 4) The writing is simple and easy to understand. TL is doing a good job for now with the translation.5) Characters even though not properly fleshed out, it isn't bad to the point it's unreadable.6) the interactions between the characters are better than most novels out there. Though it exactly doesn't feel real, the interactions between the mc and his daughter never fails to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter7) No probs with pacing. Nothing seems out of place.cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro.)2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Inconsistent update! Really hate it!!! (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it.3) There are few typo errors, though it's not to the point that it's unreadable. No prob with grammar.. 4) Greedy WN & TLs locked this novel only after 4 chaps!! This sucks. That's why deducted points from updates.5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) No world build up and no plotline as of now. One can guess some plotlines tho but we know nothing of this world!IMO:- We need consistent updates!!!!RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4 & con-3)update: 4/10 (con-2)plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&6) characters: 9/10 (pro-3&5)pacing: 8/10 (pro-7)dialogues: 8.5/10 (pro-6 con-5)entertainment: 9.5/10OVERALL: 4/5 Conclusion:An amazing SOL novel with excellent potential; the only prob being updates! Hope to see regular updates in this one... Chapter 1 will be enough to hook most of you to this novel.WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC is SUPER OP! But also kinda submissive to his daughter... Can be seen as his love for his daughter (fatherly love no Incest!!!)
One of the worst novels Ive read. The positiv is the world description. Otherwise, complete and uther garbage. There really is no logic in the MC persona, after 6 chapters the ^world^ isntbreally described. The system isnt really a system with interaction, the MC just knows through the system. . The plot (if there really is one) is so full of holes you can drive a truck through it.
Boring and unfinished way to over reviewed
I cannot believe so many people are enjoying the novel. Collections and all, thanks for the support. Remember, if you like it? Add it to your collection and a vote won't do any harm to my confidence. Thank you once more.
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how many chapters are there in the book and why do you continue to make Carlos a pain in the ass and a main character I thought the story was to destroy him and take everything from him I would think he should be dead not trying to be sexual with Nora she is better than that and needs better than it