Boring and unrealistic
Overall is good . The story is also pretty good. It creates suspense. So I love it . I reccomend this novel to those who love horror and suspense.
Great story just like the game following the same story and the same style however problem is that M.C doesnt have a name i dont know if this was on purpose or a accident and you rolled with it howAever this is really great i expect a lot of great things in youre next stories
Its an interesting turn of events and I wish you good luck with forthcoming chapters.Waiting to read the awesome NULL..!!.I am so thrilled and excited to read such a script and the author's imagination is surely to be appreciated.
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Have any of you ever read a book that breathes? One that jus took seemed realistic enough to take a life on its own? Because this is one of them. I am not saying this as an exaggeration. I mean it as it stands, as I find this book incredible and much more deserving of views.Let me preface this by saying, I did not play the original game it was ‘based’ on. I also use the word based loosely, just as this book takes a story on its own, and there was no need for any backgrounds info or experience from the original source, and I was immersed by the time I was at Ch 12-13.Now, the grammar is great. Indisputably so. It is a sight for sore eyes on this side laden with bad syntax. As for the characters, I do love a Main who is willing to be ruthless when it counts. We all know that’s a ***** hero isn’t interestingly anymore, but I have read many originals which try to skew as far away as possible, turning our Main into a hateful massmurderer, which in my opinion is worse. This book finds an acceptable (even interesting and innovative, I think) middle ground between altruistic superman and homicidal maniac.For the world building, I quite honestly don’t know which is original and which has its origins in the game. So although lovely I will refrain from any comments. But what I can judge is the interactions between the characters in the world, there conversations, attitudes, relationships, and I can say that I feel submerged in a world that is not earth.What I do struggle with, but that is really small, is the writing style as sometimes I find the same words repeated over in a narrative passage (a personal ire taught to me since elementary school). But let us be real, it would not be a problem in the myriad of different, much worse, originals, so it won’t be one for me here either. You know what the say, when everything’s perfect, the mistakes just turn more glaring, and what would never ge an issue in mediocrity can be in great works. So I will leave my review at 5 stars. No less, no more.I think this may have gotten me into si-fi ^^’
well i like that novel and the story is ok so far but the update ist soooo slow its feels like 1 chap a week.mybe u need to change the translator?
Looking forward to how the story will unfold. The concept is quite interesting. Keep up the good work and I wish for more chapters to come.
The formating really needs help, the author's writing style of skill/stat dump doesnt help .
Such a short story it seems to be getting good so far and I'm interested in reading more hopefully soon I think this story has potential...I'll be waiting for more.
Abandon this novel cockold novels are so bad that I vomited while trying to read this novel
IN A NUT: MC reborn as a baby WITH A SYSTEM in another world after a boring prev. life. Although like most of the systems MC can lvl up, make skills and buy stuff, the story takes place in a CULTIVATION WORLD... Pls, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK N GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS!!!!