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Ridiculous. It's just a plain completely broken MC nothing more to say.
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Wow... wow and wow this book is so professionally written and even though I am not any where near half-way through
It's a hilarious story. I am satisfied with MC. He's cunning and not a push-over like 'I Am Not The Son of Providence'. But my problem is that the script keeps changing constantly and it doesn't stay in one place. This ruins the Cast of Characters that have a lot of potential and are no less hilarious. So it makes me sad. This is also a short novel so you can tell it wont go far!!
The writing style really reminds me of "Skeleton Training Manual" I almost thought it was the same Author..[img=coins]
I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.
it's really good and funny
It's a decent read author, good job!
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Another story that's hard to read, with another idiotic and pathetic MC, no backbone and the story said he was intelligent and had the best grades and such, but he just seems like a moron, so conflicting,whoever wrote this should pay attention to what there writing, how do you not realize how conflicting your story your writing is, its actually sad really.
i really dont know what to say but i'll just say i am a bit dissapointed with the development of story so far the betrayal thta was foreshadowing is taking too long
I will put 5 stars to enourage the author, i like this GENRE SO FUCKING MUCH, after IRAS died i really wanted a novel wit this theme, but its always dropped.
we still have time to next week
guys let's rally and gather support from this novel.
the suspense is killing me and it needs to get translated for the greater good of humanity
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