this novel made me speechless and i think it's a magnificent debut go on buddy!!!
Hmmmmm. where do I start. First I have read to Chapter 41. Frankly, these chapters were among the most boring chapters in my life, but since it is the author's first novel, let's forgive him. The biggest problem I faced was the stretching of events, the large number of disgusting dialogues, the large stuffing of information, and the writer's attempt to enter the drama and (psychological) element, and these two fields are needed A writer with great experience, and I doubt that he is still in the last chapter he has published. The hero is still 10 years old, and the storytelling method was terrible. It made me sleep. There is no suspense in the events (note this from my point of view.)
Well to be sincerely honest,in my humble opinion withoutbeing sentimental nd of course without offending any1 who thinks differently frm my opinion bt also looking into matter with perspective distinction & without condemning any1’s POV I honestly believe I have nothing to say.
Author deletes reviews that are under 4 stars so this is 5 star in suckiness.Congratulation for the writer. There are grammatical errors in the first few sentences...
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What an empty space he feels. I really relate to his pain but it's kind of hard to make Rihanne stay and I don't think he will ever forget the pain.
Not really smart or high IQ like its described MC can't explain his reasoning to people and people are stupid you may lose brain cells while reading
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Literally mind numbingly awful. This novel is made for 12 yearold non native English speakers. The author obviously does not get out of the house much because it because 100% clear by chapter 35 they have no experience with normal human interactions. The MC meets with the first real female character and immediately just shouts at her “shut up thot.”If you like incel prepubescent outdated humor with absolutely horrible writing quality and beyond generic plot, this is the novel for you!
This is an okay read but the problem I had is that it is nothing new or different instead of an mc that is trying to do something different we have someone who is praising democracy etc. while doing everything I have already read about already in a different story,I believe this would have been a much better story if instead of instantly trying to turn the country into a democracy he tried his best to maintain his rights as king. This would have been a much better story than what we got.
The storyline, the setting and everything is on point. It grabs the reader from the start and never lets you go. The depiction is so accurate that for a moment, i thought i was experiencing what the ML was. I love it so far. Kudos to you author