This story is a great disappointment ,I expected much more than that . For a person who was hailed as the strongest in his previous life ,the MC sure is dumb . Not to forget to mention the grammatical errors . Editing ,lots and lots of editing , this story needs a hell lot of editing. The plot is interesting but the characters are horribly designed .
keeps getting more and more interesting.. Definitely a slow burn but hopefully would be worth the wait..story design and depiction of little details is applaudable ❤️
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Well , I was not at all interested when I first saw this book , it didn't have cover but the story was awesome so far , you should read it , it's very interesting
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I love this novel and would like to see an update soon and more frequently if possible if not, oh well. I hope you stick with it and write more, good luck!
Welcome to the story!This is not a shameless review by the author. I believe this novel deserves 5-star.You might say that every author thinks that way about his own story. And I think you are right but I want to put forward some pros and cons pointing out as to why it deserves 5-star.I won't be listing them separately as pros and cons as I believe that some points that might be cons for some readers might be pro for the other.1. The story revolves around a dystopia and unlike those many 'just dystopia' it indulges in not only the dangers and injustice but also the aftereffects of such a defective system and also how the residents are emotionally affected by such an environment. 2., Unlike other novels where MC is absolutely weak from the start or absolutely strong from the start (a bit too strong making a mess of the story where every problem is a problem only until MC arrives), this novel has an MC who is physically average at the beginning but has the mental fortitude of a killer. So you have it, weak from the outside strong from the inside. (this is only true in the beginning MC grow in strength)3. The story is mostly focused on the MC so there aren't multiple PoVs.4. The writing quality I believe is good enough.5. The story has a setting that is a mixture of occult literature and shinobi background.
For an average novel, I give an average rating. This book is your typical cliché overpowered cheat novel. MC has the power to attract overpowered pets and shock everyone. Dumb arrogant character appears in less than 10 chapters, he attempts to 'kill' the main character because main character insulted him. Hence main character attempts to kill him as revenge but ignorant police attacks main character because he has the power to control beast, "He must be a traitor to humans". Then proceeds to attack and get demolished by main character, "Impossible, how could a human achieve this level of power". Stronger guy shows up and resolves misunderstanding, "That cannon fodder attacked our beloved MC first! Ignorant police, you're fired from your job! You are a god-level talent, you need to join our (insert prestigious academy). I will give you money for you to join it". First up, we have no idea how this system work at all, no numbers or anything. Upgrades are thrown here and there and I doubt they are even keeping track of the number of points MC has. To nerf the main character so that the story can be extended, naturally we have to suppress the main character's cheat and instead opt for a god-level potential pet. Naturally since this is a cliché overpowered cheat novel, we need to have absolutely no world building. We'll just throw out the details as the plot progresses. Naturally, I came here having no expectations of this novel. To me, this novel is just some junk food to eat while looking for actually good novels to read. So in summary, your typical cliché novel that can be found everywhere on this website. Good luck finding an actual good read.
I have read a lot of novels with bad grammar, but not once in my life have I ever seen a novel with this bad of grammar. I mean, everyone paragraph has multiple grammatical errors that makes it hard to understand. The plot for this novel is, in my opinion, very good, it also has a ton of potential, but not under this current author. I understand that the author is probably new to writing novels, but at least try to appear as though you actually cared about the quality of your novel. The characters are ok at best, but most of the time they are just not interesting, they don't feel unique. The main character is kind of funny at some times, but that's the best I can say for the MC. The only pro to this story is that he regularly updates it. Overall this novel is pretty bad, not because of the plot, but because of the author. Alright alright, I'm done ranting, but it's kind of frustrating when you see a novel that has so much potential but is then ruined by the actual writing of the story. So to conclude this rant, I would say read this only if you don't care about grammatical errors and if you don't care about most of the characters being, well, 'normal'.
read all published chapters in one day. very smooth writing and very good story.