Review after 200+ chapters : Honestly, the MC is a know it all that actuallly knows nothing. Find myself questioning the logic behind his decision on a chapter by chapter basis (should not happen). It mostly has to do with the unneccesary lying that keeps putting him in disadvantaged situationsHowever, the author does a “great job” at covering for this by creating multiple plot armour devices. (This isnt a major spoiler so dont worry) He gave him a ‘bluff scroll’ that allows all his lies to be percieved as truths. Also, he has a time reversal ability so he can fix his mistakes. My main issue with the bluff scroll is already stated, but the reversal seems like a plot device to create suspense in the story. Thats not a bad idea if the situation reached an unsolvable level. The real problem is the author instead usIng it for simple mistakes he could have avoided easily. Just makes the MC out to be an idiot thats super forgetful and carelessAnother problem, depends on your opinion though; if your looking for this story to stay faithful to the stats, you will be dissapointed. Id say after 30 chapters, they are just tacked on metaphorically to show his growth. Even the level system is thrown up in the air and gives no solid referrence of how strong these characters really are. This problem also bleeds into the world building that isnt very detailed. Yes, we get a general understanding of the world, but the descriptions dont explain the authors imagination well. This has more to do with descriptions of places the MC visits. You get a simple “Ancient structure with high walls and western desig….(not an exact qoute). Hard for the reader to truly immerse himself in the plot.On to the writing quality. Its pretty good, but nothing to write home about. Very simplistic in nature and easy to understand. The action scenes are a little dull. The Author does make up for it with good character dialogue. There are also a few pronoun errors and mixups every one in awhile. Plus, the author uses the wrong character for certain dialogues. However, in the end, its simplicity is also a plus if your looking for a light readThe side characters on the other hand are the best part of this novel imo. Yes, they are a similiar to other very often used personalities, but they have their own unique charm. Find myself enjoying their interactions with the MC overall. Definitely breathes some life into the plot.Storyline is a solid “Shuras Wrath” plot but always a good one to read. Its entertaining but predictable. Author puts his own twist on some of the story arcs to seperate the story into its own indivual bookLastly, the MC is too dense. If your able to bring something out of the game, you should be able to tell its not a game anymore. There’s no excuse for that whatsoever.Overall, its a decent book to read inbetween other books your waiting on. ?
another system novel. time to dig in. I hope this one won't let me down and the author keeps on updating chapters like he's doing right now.
and that's that huh. I'm going to assume you intended to take a break and it turned into an extended hiatus on this work. probably started writing another book? or maybe you didnt know where to go from here and didnt want to drop the quality writing just to churn more chapters out? Either way, I really enjoyed the story. There was more character growth in this short 200 chapter story than quite a few 1000 plus chapter xianxias... the story telling just seemed to improve with each chapter too. I found myself engaged and engrossed with the story, to the point where I didn't even notice the many grammatical issues. My absolute favorite part was the constant introspection of the main character. it really made the character come to life, and made me care for his struggles. While the world building was the weakest part of the story besides the grammar issues, it was not that bad and certainly served its purpose for the story. I wish you all the best Author, and maybe you will one day come back to this novel, inspired, and write it to a satisfactory conclusion. Afterall, we didn't even get to see Ayda meeting Dearie before it cut off! i looked forward to some cat fights between the two haha
GAME NOVEL. Title is honest but tag isn’t. Eastern fantasy it says just like the other novel this small batch when both are game novels.Thanks for wasting my time. Review stands until tag is fixed.Hope this also helps fellow readers who do not like game novels. Don’t waste your time here.
I'm really hoping those 3 chapters actually meant for 1 day. 3 chapters/day instead of 3 chapters/week. Just imagine waiting a month to get only 12-13 chapters...
I love what I read so far though I only read 2 1/2 chapters I'd definitely come back hope you continue and just reading this to calm my mind so that I can write my second chapter has helped me
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one of my favorite story in my library , i hope the story won't take too much time to reveal the memories they had forgotten .. please keep up the update everyday , thanks webnovel
story is good it’s getting nowhere plus i guess n need to put the same story on reverse side (his/her side) it should end soon i hope not dragging to some circle
This writer has given thid lady so mu h shit to contend this book is very degrading towards women. The writer could have done better this book is crap. I cant believe a woman wrote this.
I have never met a MORE STUPID alpha female (?) than this ALIA!!! i thought they were taught things about mate bonds?! No wonder she was given a nearly perfect mate... it's because she really has NOTHING INSIDE HER HEAD. I'm sorry, i still like the author very much, but i really dont like DUMBgIRLs
this book is amazing. get through the first few chapters and I promise it's worth it