kartikagarwal
the best combination for great reveng wealth and being reborn
A good story overall. I love the world building and character development. Keep it up
to be honest, has high potential, but a lot of wording mistakes along with number mistakes that pull you out of wanting to continue reading. the kids seem to be way more mature than they should be at the described ages. and alot of other small problems and consistency issues.
Did this get dropped?
Loving the updates my author. The last one is so scorching. Team devil girl. lol
Great story but unfair with the last set of chapters I’m paying 60+ credits for one chapter that’s repeating every couple pages! Seriously over 100 credits for 2 chapters that was only 9 pages long!!
excellent job author
love the flow of the book. great read
good reading, satisfy so far at pg 223...but don't drag to long to finish-will spoil the story n get boring
this story sucks. Stupid character. I want to really punch her in her face. Hate her stupidity. grow up already. disgusting idiot
Thank your buddy I am really proud ?
I lovedddddd these books- both the first and this one. Definitely want to see a book on Cayden as the God of war ......
