This novel is absolute gold. The characters are amazing, the world is amazing, and most importantly, the plot is engaging. The author takes alot of tropes and uses them in new and exciting ways, bringing elements from many genres to create something refreshing and new. I would absolutely recommend this novel to anyone looking for a good read.
Amazing story so far. The story itself is well-written, and while the writing quality could be worked on, the grammar is nigh immaculate. The first incident isn't really unique, but the author does a good job portraying it as such. Keep up the good work, author!
Fascinating story. From the plot unique you can tell that it has the potential to blow into a sweeping story. There were logical errors there as well as sentences where the past tense should be used. But hey, we're only human. Apart from that, the story was straightforward to read and had a continuous flow. Keep up the good work. You'll do fabulous.
excellent work mate i really love the story the characters Everything is exciting . I have read the episode of the funereal many times and it still makes me laugh That fella chrono is awesome it just like he figured everything about the world he really gets it keep posting man I really get an addiction . keep up the good work don't take your sweet time
Just reading the synopsis of this novel, I would realize that it is not worth a read. Which “innocent” guy would stay innocent after getting beat up?
The number of angry 80-year-olds is much lower than the number of angry under 30-year-olds.In all theory, a 418-year-old should be a very patient person.Likewise, if you spend 400 years in "hell" and you lean on something that you don't have, and which gradually becomes a mirage, a distant memory (Like a family) you become crazy to a fairly high speed.I always thought that the novel where the goal of the mc was something passive (here "to protect his family") the novel could only be boring.Just watch all the best anime, imagine if naruto didn't want to be Hokage, if Gon (HxH) didn't want to find his father, if Songoku didn't want to fight powerful opponents, if Light didn't want to kill all the criminals...A goal is at least half of a character, if he doesn't have one then it's a half empty character.In short, let's talk more concrete, the main character could be interesting if he had the will to do something.The world is basic and nothing special.The secondary characters are at least as boring as the protagonist.the writing quality is rather good if we forget the fact that the author does not proofread.the rhythm of the chapters is good.
This humble being have yet to read your O mighty novel, But the moment I saw non-harem and rebirth. I knew that I have to give thou my sincerest gratitude by giving you my stars. Long live the No-harem novels!!!
i really love the character and how he is cool but strict at the same time. its not your generic fighting cultivation but it has that cultivation feeling but with a nice plot and story line with all the characters has different characteristics
I read this originally at Gravity Tales and loved every single part of this novel. The grammar, world building and story are top notch. You won't regret reading this.
Hmmm only 3 novels this week? Im only gonna read two of them including this one and the other is a secret but you can have a hint on what it is so here “Roar” nonono not “Roar X3” Im not a furry i swear
Story is so great! Can't wait for more chapters.FILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLLERFILLLERFILLERFILERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFFILER
Give me more pls , this Novel is incredible ........................................................................................................................................