So far its very interesting. mc past suspense and characters are all perfect and also it would be good if the story picks up the pace ( right now it's a little slow).
Also, pls update 3-4 times a week in future also. overall very great.
story is good but thing is Main character is the dumbest person you can think even the Manga protagonist of Japanese stories are much better than him at least they can think in some situation he can't even think anything it doesn't even know how society works even a little bit and I don't know why author keeps doing , if author listens to my review and try to change him in litre chapters then I will think about in and delete this review until then I am not deleting it
early chapters were super good until chapter 180 . The author tried to write in a "sophisticated" way, and it was a mood killer. after chapter 200 ,bro did a 180-degree angle and changed the story entirely. I was trying to get *hard, but i can'twith this new OF A BS STYLE OF WRTING!!!
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very bland writing.it is not a system/ farming novel .it just a unsuccesful wish full filling novel. mc bought a gf from video streaming site just because she wears non modern dress. but after getting 20 k she ready to sleep together and moved with him.us readers feels Jo emotion from reading first 20 chapters.
Seems to be a nice and interesting story so I hope to read more soon.
from what chapters there are so far I enjoyed it very much I would like for more chapters to be released soon as I feel this book would be great success of it keeps going.
The story seems to be good so far and I really like it. I don't think there a lot of issue, even the language is good, and it's not like we don't understand it, even though is not your native language.Anyway I recommend it, really.
Well poor quality translation probably and badly edited MTL,No suspense i won't spoil so i won't say more than this.If you don't mind a bad translation and a mc too op since day 1 you can read it.
Yay Release pls.......................................................................................................................................
This is a super confusing and pedantic novel!!! I really don't understand why people are supporting this novel. Don't get picked!Contrary to it's hashtag, it is not relaxing at all, just boring and dull.Read "Immortal in the Magic World" soo much better, best novel in this trail!
I enjoyed your sense of humor and the astral projection setup. RIP Kobe ?. One thing I noticed is you put plain when I think it’ “plane” unless that’ on purpose and I‘m an idiot. I’m the guy who replied on disc btw. looking forward to reading more chapters in the future.