4th Review: (Chapter 510) Honestly, this is probably one of the best harem novels out there, the quality is impeccable, the story is well written and thought out, even up to the latest chapter, the author keeps writing some scenarios that captivates the reader to fully engross them to the story he wrote. The harem members actually have a personality that's not banal and blank. I also love the character development of the MC, to someone that doesn't feel love and only focuses on satiating his desire to someone that takes consideration of other people's feelings to finally, someone that feels love and reciprocates other people's feelings towards him. The romance is amazing in this, almost all of the girls have chemistry with the MC and their interactions are so cute. Overall I give this story a 9.7/10 and it's not even halfway done, so excited to see where this goes!
everything here is ok except for the grammar. Author if you are reading this please fix the grammar. Everything else is good though you just need to fix your grammar
This website shoud had some restrict to make peopel post a review just after reading some chapter of the novel.. because i read comment's before i read any novel and i'm seeing some peopel saying their thoughts that this novel "looks like" and they review it with 1 start... Kids a review is something you do after actualy read the novel not something that you just read the Synopsis and the tag martial art and make a review without reading the novel and saying that --->"looks like a generic martial art like all the other one i read before" and when i'm read they Reading Status is actualy 0 so they didn't read the novel and they can evaluate the novel.. So just saying perhaps is bether to enable reviewing with a reading status at least on a 30 40 chapters.. so they can actualy review the novel properly
This story is totally uninspired and not worth reading in my opinion. I read the first 60 chapters and so far it's all been incredibly generic. The chapters are short, the characters are one dimentional and have no depth, the plot only exists to serve the main character.The author is writjng 2 books at once and publishing 4 chapters a day and it shows in the writing. entire chapters of this book can be summed up in 1 line and everything is so drawn out for no reason. you just can't write a proper story if you're forcing 4 chapters a day.
Review for chapter 1-10: The start was very fluid. No huge info dump that would make you drop on the first chapter though a lot are taken aback from the text message from a kid. If you get pass that, you'll find out how good this novel is.The world got slowly narrated in bits and pieces by the MC since it's in his POV. One of the bits I like is when they're looting, each item is told specifically and not generalized like saying 'we collected everything' e.g. Even the guns are identified properly, not just simple saying rifle, shotgun, or pistol.The characters are great and the High IQ Low-Medium EQ MC is something I really like and the MC is awkwardly funny in some situations besides his calculated nature. 5 Stars!
Avoid novels with modern setting and real world countries names, or you would see "china is the best in the world" cliche, the mc would start massacre for the smallest reason even for the trouble he started first.Too bad I kinda like the world setting though.
the blurb is interesting I can't wait to check the chapters! ?
This book is so so so good iam obsessed ...
Please author try and update soon.., u can’t just drop this intriguing story and leave it half way...️naaarh it not right ...
This is such an unexpected twist
Good one this novel
Really enjoyed this story