More Chapter Please
Why don't you update chapters regularly?ಠ_ಠ
loving all your books,hope to get a standalone book for Riley and Jayden
please update soon
Loving this book!! 10 stars!!! Love the suspense, surprises, everything!!
Okay, let me just say this: the Longevity Pill reveal is one of the best plot twists I've read in a while. The way Ling Xiao sets up this whole elaborate con—pretending to make pills from human lifespan threads, letting the nobles lose their minds with desire, Prince of Chu literally on his knees begging—and then the Emperor casually drops 'Aunt, please stop toying with us' like he's been three steps ahead the whole time? Chef's kiss. And then the System comes out and reveals it was literally just a beauty pill, not even a real longevity pill. Ling Xiao couldn't afford it even if she sold her pants. I literally laughed out loud. The nobles were ready to sell their souls for decades of extra life and she gave the Emperor a skincare product. The structure of this scene is brilliant too. It starts with worldbuilding (the life-threads, the Ghost-God's rules), builds tension as the nobles get more and more desperate, peaks with Prince of Chu's heartbreaking plea, then deflates completely when the Emperor reveals they were played. The pacing is perfect—every beat lands. What really sold it was that Ling Xiao's internal monologue. She's genuinely delighted by how foolish humans are. 'Ah, so delightful.' That line gave me chills in the best way. She's not a villain, she's just... amoral in the most charming way possible.
Assalam-u-Alaikum!Your book is amazing please update soon! desperately waiting for next chapter you're so good at writing my Favourite author I've read your other 2 books \\"obsession\\" and \\"possession\\" And I love the main character irtaza in your novel \\"possession\\" ...️...️...️...️
did you remove the kidnapper book
One of the BEST vampire books I read so far. And not dragging at all, with all of the main characters being strong enough for each other, lol… I’m keeping this perfect book in my library for another read in the future!! Thanks, J.Tarr!!!
Maybe this could help to awaken the feelings of Collin for his mate
sad but good story. keep it up
Oh my! I just started reading it and I am hooked. I loved the synopsis and I’m loving the book itself.