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The other god was back to his masculine shape and wore the most dreadful clothes she had ever seen. She felt that her sister Beauty would just die instantly seeing this abomination, that was why she was hanging out with him so much. That way, her sister was kept at bay. Luck answered her with a wry smile.
[Failure: A thousand Lashes, Attention of the church and King Wimbledon, Longsong counterattack]
To be able to sneak up and capture one of their men from right under their noses meant that the strength of this new arrival had far surpassed theirs or they had an ability to prevent them from sensing him. Either way this new arrival spelled trouble for them.
The only reason he is still alive is because he is too awesome.
This is trash beyond trash iredeemable trash unrecyclable trash this proves the author too is nothing but trash. There are tons of Web novels which have a western style to them which are really good eg book eating magician ( Chinese harry potter) if you are really that brainless and retarded that you cannot even follow their example just stick to your cultivation novel style and stop disgracing western style writing you piece of trash author. Because of you qidian should give a -negative star rating system that would be the true rating of this piece of trash produced by you a piece of trash author.
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THIS IS MY FAV NOVEL!btw PotatoGodofTime is trolling (it's fake ML doesn't betray)Honestly, it's a good novel about a badass Female lead who face slaps, takaes care of white lotuses.The male lead is cold hearted but tries his best to win her cold heart with his many disguises.Meaning yes, she trash talks about him to himself cuz she didn't know he was wearing a disguise.IT'S SO CUTE AND FUNNY.Of course if you hate that there is rape and ML turning into the devil then I guess don't read it?It's overall a good novel to pick up and read.They have a good ending just in case you're wondering.
30 chapters - DROPPEDI registered only to write this review, why! Cuz I'm mad for wasting time reading 30 chapters,The story is one of the best, good ideas, low, yet acceptable world-building; but the plot, logic, motive, character development, are all crap! Please forgive my offense but the author could have given us a beautiful fantastic work but he hurriedly pulls crap from God knows where and magically the 14 years boy becomes a badass in a few days, yet it could be acceptable to 10 years olds if he at least provided a justification, then a series of "matter of fact"s are thrown all over the place, add more "beauties" " save the father" and "run from the enemy" well, the young guy now is an expert after a few days_ and here you are, a very immature stupidly mustered plot with no motives, no details, no development.This is a light novel, I'm not expecting something by Dostyvasky, nevertheless; the author needs to be aware of a very minor little detail called "LOGIC" I refrained from mentioning details for spoilers, and I gladly wholeheartedly kiss goodbye for this lovely amazing work.DROPPED.
Zi Wu waves his hand, smiling as he says: "What reverend, what grand master? Can the amount of reverends and grand masters that've come to the palace these past years be considered little? It is but an empty t.i.tle, nothing more than fakes, deceiving mystics trying to play G.o.d. Hao-er should not believe it."
A solid if trope-heavy story that accomplishes what it is trying to do. However, it is hampered by formatting and grammatical errors that bring reading to a screeching hault.
This is a very great fanfic, ive been reading it since day one and it never misses, yes its technically all smut but it also has plot. Keep up the good work author.
Great world/dungeon building and mc personal development. Pretty in depth system calculations as well.
