Writing Quality great.Stoy it's too early to judge but it look good.Character Design I halfway do not care I just hope the last people is black. Updating is great but u probably shed upload one chapters a day after 150 ch.World background is good for now.
This is a copy of my other review but since it’s the same story it should be fine.Good. ?Author has good writing quality, updates pretty frequently, has pretty good development, character design is cool and there‘s pictures to go with most of the main characters, and goes into detail for background.
I go through these chapters like candy I need more!! I'm in love with the MC's ruthlessness it's true ruthlessness not like other novels that will say their MC is ruthless and then crumble when they see a hot girl. No this, this is a masterpiece, not only does the MC value his life over everything, the author makes it seem so natural. The details for every fight aren't clunky, they are sharp and intelligent packets of information that make it easy to imagine and follow the fight. The gore, God, the gore is amazing I can't describe it to you, you just have to read the story to find out. Another positive is that I can see this story being quite long and have many discoveries that make you want to buy the 35 premium chapters just to see more! Absolutely amazing novel.
i first check other half system but then I switched this because it technical issues how can there are be some of they issued for this I guess.i like this novel
read the other novel, it was great. but MC here is a goody shoes and self righteous. that okay because it can personal choice of reader but the problem is MC here literally c*ck. ya he gets c*ck and he still is emotional about her.I still don't believe it that it is written by same author as other novel(first demonic dragon).
So... You deleted fair reviews to get a better rating? Here you go, enjoy 1 star. Delete this one and there will be more. 140 characters are annoying.
This story has potential. The protagonist looks like a 1000-year-old virgin when he finds himself being used by a beautiful girl, but it is acceptable, since she is the only one counting him with the supernatural world.
If you realize that everything he experiences is new to him, then you will not hate this story: Remember that he was gaining little and was only eating, sleeping, and working for your all life.
Usually all MC cares about their life first and then their shortcomings. The MC took a while to realize his shortcomings, but he quickly corrects them.
The novel's progress is also acceptable.
Into the Zombie World is a book of fiction written by Neil_Ads. The story revolves around a man named Nile who sought to survive a zombie apocalypse after his untimely death by being bumped by a truck. The author uses present-tense. Well, it is a good story. Personally, what I love about the book is Nile's intelligence and the way he reacts to certain things. He thinks logically, making the right choice except for the store as he could've looted the first three houses instead of choosing the store.I love his plans and schemes to get rid off or defeat zombies. I think there is a mixture of futuristic technology since there is this so called system that displays certain things. I'm not used to reading these kind of novel mixtures.Anyway, the grammar and punctuation is definitely one thing the author must improve. Yes, it uses present-tense but because of this, it seems more like a guy telling actions rather than a describing and story-telling. He is walking, He is going, he is banging, things like that should be changed.Because of this, it lacks emotions and some elements of a horror novel. You could describe the zombies more rather than using Big, small, fat, or sharp teeth. I didn't feel any suspense except for the parts in which the dialogues weren't aplenty. I would like to suggest that you describe things like this:Example:His leg were trembling. Try going to the next level:His legs were noodles. Or to add more suspense and frightening elements, I would suggest:Example: The silence shrouded his mind. (Lacks emotions)"Once the quietness arrived, it stayed and spread in Estha. It reached out of his head and enfolded him in its swampy arms…sent its stealthy, suckered tentacles inching along the insides of his skull, hoovering the knolls and dells of his memory, dislodging old sentences, whisking them off the tip of his tongue."Something like that. Well, I hope this honest criticism helped out!
The story is nice and on point.love it and hope for more☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
As a fellow writer about a stone protagonist, I eagerly read this story from a competitor. Their story has a unique premise that takes from a very informed background, keeping things fresh. I can comfortably say that, if you are looking for a sci-fi story with a rock protagonist, this is the story for you. If you want a different story with rock protagonists, there are others around. There is more than enough room for all of us to write in this space and more than enough readers to go around. Brother Space Rock, Little Brother Volcanic Rock greets you. :)
This is not a story. It seems to be just a bunch of copy and paste from a bunch of different resources/references or websites. I haven’t seen any story or plot in here and don’t know where all the 5 star reviews are coming from. It looks more like the material someone is using to write a college term paper.
cheated readers out of an actually good novel with this pos, how did this novel get released instead of the actual 1st place novel. What is the point of the voting pool if the novels that are actually voted for aren't released by their vote counts?