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So far, the world-building and character development have been intriguing. It's fascinating to discern the unique aspects that set this isekai apart while still recognizing familiar elements. I appreciate the protagonist's personality, and it's evident who the main love interest is, which I find appealing – there's no uncertainty about shipping them, as it eliminates the frustration of guessing wrong. Although the MC has yet to unlock the romantic aspect of the system or the specific quest related to [D-234 days until the fall of the Solar estate], I'm eager to see how these unfold.
The writing is commendable, although there are minor inconsistencies in plant terminology and some species confusion in the translation. The narrative revolves around Lu Xuan, the protagonist, as he adapts to life in this new world. The plot predominantly showcases a ruthless struggle for self-interest, with the main character possessing a cheat that enables him to advance without putting himself at risk.
Though the MC initially had a safety net, his own greed occasionally leads him into perilous situations. As the story progresses, the world's plant lore unfolds gradually through the MC's acquisition of new skills.
Initially, I found the scarcity and underrepresentation of female cultivators off-putting. However, this aspect evolves as the character moves to different locations. This could be interpreted as a subtle commentary on the harsh realities faced by female practitioners in the beginning location or the author's conscious effort to address the imbalance later on. In the "Sky Sword Arc," the gender ratio seems more balanced now.
I fixed it. Thank you.
what happened to the original author? why is it on haitus
I like this.
FINALLY... THE FIRST COMMENT BELONGS TO ME( took me way too long)
The female rapes the male
How are you going to say one of the best arcs in fiction is trash, even though you didn't read it?!?!?!?
manga is japanese comic essentially..
Yeesh, how do people even write stories like this? Do they have no self worth as writers or something?
I generally shy away from ghost stories, but this one has a comedic twist! Our protagonist embarks on a hilarious ghost-hunting adventure while living with her biological and loving family, including her adoptive grandfather who's both funny and supportive – he trusts her judgment unless there's genuine danger. Along the way, we meet numerous interesting characters, and the FL (female lead) gradually warms up to the ML (male lead), despite his complicated past and evil energy.
The ML has had his share of struggles, with many unexpected plot twists revealing more about his dark qi and their intertwined history. Both characters exhibit strong support for each other, with the ML's bodyguards playing a cheerleading role. Once FL realizes her feelings for ML, she becomes proactive, considering they're mature adults. The ML is remarkable in his restraint and constant concern for FL, who can be impulsive at times. According to Grandpa, their relationship is described lightheartedly, comparing FL to a pig eyeing a cabbage – ML, of course!
The protagonist's life took a delightful turn when she revealed her true identity as a girl after pretending to be a boy in her childhood. Reunited with her real family, she started attending a new school where she quickly became an admired celebrity, capturing the hearts of everyone around her. Her loyal best friend followed her, unknowingly developing feelings for her. In an unexpected twist, she sought help from a fellow student, only to be rejected due to their prior connection as the school grass (a term for a romantically unattainable crush) desired a genuine relationship. Meanwhile, her brother, a renowned superstar, added another intriguing layer to their interconnected lives.
