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Started out a copy then rough but ultimately a gem........ can’t waitTo keep reading moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar!
i don't see how people can say this is 5 star and better than number one under the heavens. it almost the same with far less happening. the author is darging arc, no character development little interaction with the world and this sect building thing is just stupid and the way he is going about it could last 100 chapters. please don't sign with QI because this story's fondation are to weak. as popcorn novel it's great but pure writing it has no legs and can't see how you will keep going
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Just one word: Fascinating.I looked for something fresh as I was waiting for other novels to be updated... and oh my. After picking it up, I expected the usual tropes regarding reincarnation/spirit transfer stories but damn.I couldn't put it down for even a minute and after reading this you will feel that other novels MCs are simply lacking both in style, intelligence and character. So here is my review of it if you are intrested, and it's spoiler free.The Story - 5/5I won't spoil anything so don't worry. The stories starts with our protagonist dying from a heart attack, from overworking, and his spirit goes to another world where he takes over a prince's body.The MC has no superpowers, no cultivating he is just a mortal thats all. But a mortal with memories from our modern world. Some reviews says his memory is overpowered but I don't think so, he utilizes all the basic knowledge that is taught in schools. Yes that may be true he remembers chemical formulas and mathematical equations but hell.If he was a diligent student -and as he is from modern china and was an engineer, that speaks from himself- so he should remember all of this. Hell even I could remember around 60-70% of the thins he brings up from school and it was fun reading about it again and I think I learned more new things from this then when I was going to school!So with the knowledge he has, he starts to develop his territory, introduce the population modern technology, industrialization, civic rights and much more, so if you would like to see how a little town with shabby, wooden cottages transforms into a city with brick buildings, this is for you. It's so satisfying to see how the world advances under his inventions.The other big plot are the witches. Yes, there is magic in the world, and as a feudal, medieval setting, they are being hunted. Badly. If they catch one, the mob may kill her on the spot or turn her over to the church which may be worse fate than death.Or MC sees magic as a new source of energy and possibilities so he wants to utilize the witches powers to help him achieve his goals and launch his people into a new, enlightened era. But to do this he needs to fight agains the church, his siblings for power and a hidden foe which when shows up our MC discovers the dark history of this new world...Characters 5/5Just... real. There are no 2D characters here. Even the villains are interesting. Be it the church's priests, army and bishops, or Roland's (the MC) siblings. Or just the nobles in the beginning who are look down on him. Everyone has a backstory, every secondary character has a personality.The witches are all different, they are not just there to flock around the MC and be possibilities for a harem ending. No. They are people, they have distinct personalities and yes, as the story goes they may have to step back sometimes and not appear all the time in the chapters, but they never fade out as in other novels, other support characters.Every one of them has a role in the story and they are well developed (and develop throughout) and interesting. I don't want to spoil anything, so you should just start reading and meet them!P. S. : Oh yeah, also there are love in the story that develops slowly and realistically. And it's not a harem (but I would not mind it to be honest :D)Translation 4/5The first half done on volarenovels by Roxerer was top notch, no problems with it at all. After it went to Qidian there were some problems, but they were minor things and they seem to constantly improve, mostly some editing problem as I see and its updated daily.Overall enjoyment 5/5Best. It's just... oh gosh. It jumped to the first place in my favorite's list and this became my most anticipated novels. It's not for you if you want fights, super power ups, chapters of cultivation and heaven shattering advances. No. You will get a novel, written in western style that is more grounded in reality then most of the other Chinese novels.The MC is intelligent, knows what he can and what he can't do, what needs to be done to be successful. You will never be frustrated why the fck does the MC feels like a 5 years old with some kind of mental disorder. The witches are not omnipotent beings they are humans too that the novels also states every time and cleverly too.There are no 50. 000 years of cultivation retreat to power up to defeat a mega op giga boss just to offend somebody who stands behind that stupid guy/girl who was his/her master and told the MC every 5 second "you dare" or "you are just an ant before me" and the other, booooooring tropes.I can't praise his novel enough. Give it a shot, if you like intelligent stories and don't mind spending 3 or 5 chapters learning how to build steam engines, to speed up the mining process of ores to build canons and brick houses for the people, because it's just sooooo satisfying seeing the development of the world and the people living in it.Conclusion: 5/5After going back to the other novels I read, catching up with the translation, I felt how much those other novels' MCs are lacking compared to Roland Wimbledon. They are just... much-much-much more... bland. Never using their brains, their logic capabilities, even if they are from 'another world' they just... never utilize anything they brought over or learned before. I started to realize how much more weak they are -in writing terms- compared to this novel and this novel's characters.I just hope the author don't mess this up and keeps it clean from all the other bullsh. t tropes all the way through. As it stands, this novel will be -at least in my opinion- one of the most well written, well thought out and most interesting novels.If you read my review until this point I thank you, and also, go and give it a shot, I hope I was able to help you pick up a good novel and you will enjoy it as much as I do.
This story is good if you don't think too much about it. MC is a troll gamer. There's some comedic relief. Everything you need to keep reading then go "why the f*** did I read till 5am?"
i guess ill review this, however take this review with a grain of salt since we are only barely getting started with the actual game. the first 40 chapters are purely prelude to what is actually going to happenbut this is my opinion of things so far.writing quality is pretty solid. simple easy to read writing, i dont find myself doing double takes on strange wording or similar things. overall good.updates. if the author can keep up his 2 chapters every other day ill be impressed. he has also done the smart thing and mass released the first many chapters in a short time frame to draw attention, now he just need the golden stars from the review to really draw attention in this oversaturated genre.the story is a bit hit or miss, its not very unique, but it is tried and tested, so you kind of know what to expect. i suppose its mostly personal preference, but i kind of look on in contempt the way he handle slaves mostly because i think im allergic to these neutral good types. and i think its hilariously hypocritical to have such strong stance on slavery while binding the adventure guild woman to eternal master-slave relationship.whatever. onto the next point.characters are ok. the mc and the wolf girl i quite like and their relationship makes sense. i like his friend and his wife. however the relationship with the mermaid woman and the adventure guild woman, kinda rub me the wrong way.mermaid does a 180 far too quickly and she feels forced into the story a bit too quickly because he needed the secretary type, the same goes for adventure guild woman, i know he needed someone versed in the world, but i just really dont like her...? oh yeah the r18 scenes are pretty cute. even if you arent really much into r18 content, its really short and sweet and generally dont take up much of the content. anyway enough ranting.the world is probably the most compelling, i find the monolith group story really good, and it makes alot more sense than the usual "black technology" or something similar explanation. so good job here author. we also have a pretty decent chunk of knowledge on the world, and i find the native faction and inhabitants act. fairly natural. the world is easily the most compelling about this story so far. so good job here. some compare it a bit to the novel "guild wars
Would be 3 but canceling out the bs reviews
Only thing that I don't like in the novel is gender bending.....................................................................................................................................................................................
This seemed like it had so much potential at the beginning, and I was so excited to read it. I wanted to see what fun things the wolf would do and people he'd meet. This unfortunately turned out to be pretty cliche and boring. The mc is dumb and let's himself get pulled along by a girl with charm. He doesn't seem to have any goal in mind or any plausible reasons for what he does. The author repeats things like "sad background bc I'm an orphan" instead of going into it. Ultimately the characters are just badly written to me bc they seem so robotic and boring. Very disappointed.
LOVE the book, really... but like, why the info dumps? It's so great to read, but past chapter 400 and you feel exhausted with every chapter. Like, it has no real content and it feels like the world building never stopped because the author does TOO much world building.We get 10chapters for like every second case, then even the 'short' ones take over three chapters. We get foreshadowed for so many things and there are hints here and there, but it also lacks drastically in following these hints because the author doesn't know how to progress the story. It also feels like the author doesn't read his own novel, because several times it was mentioned he levelled up, then he didn't do that apparently, then he would level up soon, but when is soon? Like, from the beginning of the novel till around chapter 400 we have been in the world like 1 month. Seriously??? In a novel where years are thrown in the thousands, we spent ONE MONTH in 400 chapters?Another thing that really annoys me (besides the missing grammatical skills) is the fact that the author seems to forget plot points he wrote and then makes it so that the mc seemed to forget these points (like ignore the fact that heir memory is hyperspeed), also it's super weird how the info dumps come in the middle of the fights and the talks partially seem to be minutes long while the enemy waits and doesn't do anything.Please explain why a hyperspeed brain needs minutes for three-sentence-discussions?? Like you could be talking with your spiritual sense for hours in other novels, and only a second passed, while here, it seems that spiritual sense talking takes longer than normal talking.
