Every story you write is just a unique experience.It seems like you have such a magical pen at your home, huh? You presented your ideas and thoughts really well on the paper. I appreciate your talent.I wish I could write anything close to that. That’s too good!I am really impressed with your writing style. Keep it up! :)
Based on the numerous comments I've seen in this work, I believe it's appropriate to write another review.First and foremost, I apologize if you find too much jargon in this tale. I'm not trying to appear clever, but I'd want to find an easier way to explain my views. I don't want to beat about the bush with many words and wind up in this cycle of explanation, so I'll use one or two vocabulary to explain my idea clearly.Another aspect of this work is its formative stage.The first stage involves the MC interacting with himself and the outside environment. The MC depicted his perspective on the world and the people around him.The approach may be self-serving and hence cause readers to dislike the MC; nonetheless, his paranoid vision of the world is due to his experience.The interaction of the MC and other characters is the book's second phase. With time, I fleshed out all of these crucial characters and provided a memorable encounter that moved the narrative ahead.The world is the final stage. I brought the world to life by bringing forth the viewpoint of invisible charactersto move the plot ahead.This novel is primarily about intelligence and brain use. Although it included martial arts, that was not the focus of the novel (at least for now). However, martial arts will play a crucial role in the plot's conclusion.Thanks again for visiting, and Merry Christmas ?.
The description of the novel is more like a future event.Character is the usual beta MC with not so well family. No 'friends' but somehow he hangs out with the popular ones.He doesn't understand why people behave the way they behave. It's like everyone owes him something and he expects too much from friends he barely met a week ago but is kinda indebted to them, maybe because they are the first friends he ever had._So far, there's no direct description of the VR-world._ Story development is simply amazing. And because of MCs character, the story always gets me on edge as if something is about to happen. Got me completely hooked up.Didn't like the part where MC is in a scheme before the story even developed, the story hasn't directly given a hint but I can tell. Strong SAO vibes but I'm sure there's something different and author has plans for it.Well thought background of MCs friends. No grammatical errors and I realised that I didn't once binge read and read word to word._Updates are fast. _Take away my powerstones.
Amazing storyline, characters, just absolutely fantastic! The plot always had me on the edge of my seat, I’m so excited for more chapters!!!
nice story bro, i like the way you put even the tiniest detail to your story. I like the way you put some cliffhanger to the end of the chapter. keep it up bro, I will wait for the next chapter