looi89
One of the well written novels I’ve read so far! I’m quite happy with the character progression as well! This novel has a lot of potential hopefully the author HG, will continue to release his work! Keep up the good work.
nope at the start it is okay and interesting story but as the ch go it will become "FRUSTRATING" like going in the toilet tryng pooping but the snake wont come out the mc is costantly being tested and he is like a hot head stupid i was okey at the start it was only 1 or 2 time but it will happen again and again, too many side chs and that serana i want to slap her that badly idk why but duh dropped at ch 100
paragraphs needs to be spaced out, naming sence is horrible. should have stuck with original names and simplified things more. overall this is a good story but it's hard to follow in the beginning.
true to its word really a good novel if u are gonna read this be prepared for a slow and fulfilling development no unnecessary plots just a cautious mc and for pepople who want to read novel out of the habit of reading it everyday it's for u guys the author said that he will preserve till infinity so we can expect it to be not dropped unless he goes back on his words
The story deserves praise for its writing quality and originality in exploring ancient Japan as a setting. However, to attract an even broader audience, it would be helpful to provide a more comprehensive synopsis that gives readers a clear idea of what to expect from the plot. Additionally, considering the interest in fights and characters, further developing these aspects could further captivate readers. Keep up the excellent work!
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The author is reviewing himself, I know it's biased but one review wouldn't hurt. Plus, I'm here to give you an extra overview of the novel. English is not my first language, and I would like to apologize for any mistakes you might see. I have been writing this for almost a month, and there (currently) 47 chapters, so you can see the stability of the updates. I try to update once a day and would update more if this novel gets the top rankings (hopefully, fingers crossed).
I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what.
As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line.
The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats).
I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!
this is just made for harem, but this is the worst circumstance to get one. you got a girl that loves you to death and you cheat on her? don't do that. it's just sooooo wrong, I mean, yeah you could get stronger but you got an op wife so you can spend your time with her and get stronger over time. idk someone might like it but this is just a warning to those that won't like this.
I love this book. my only problem is there's not enough chapters I read them all just today. books good. I would recommend. please update daily
pretty good but where are the mc skills like we see a high a class skill book drop for a class which doesn't very good skill books and up to where I left around chapter 20 everyone in his party had like 2. class skills and he had 2 d class skills this dose not make sense as both shamed and hunters appeared to be common
Ive read most of this authors books and of the ones ive read none of them have disapponted me, the same goes with this book too. it looks like it has great potential and im loving it so far. the mc is realistic and likeable.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
