The story is initially intriguing, and no flaws were particularly obvious for at least 50 chapters or so. After that... well maybe the author had a sufficient following and got careless?
There are a number of instances that are tiresome but bearable; the almost obligatory "China #1" plugs, frequent contradictions in his descriptions of incidental motivations or consequences, the logical flaw in "completely conquered people are more loyal than allies" (until they believe they have a chance at rebelling, obviously).
What finally made me drop the book was the unfortunately common theme of "strong willed MC turns into putty in front of (in this case random) pretty women", which to me just speaks of shoddy character design.
Clearly the story is popular enough, but for the readers who want a consistent and cohesive narrative, I don't recommend.
Absolutely LOVED this story, it was so freaking good that I actually read it over and over again
is there an update on this story? n is there any social media I can follow?
I loved this book! I couldn’t put it down! Such a sweet story & so glad it had a happy ending!
This is a great read… hooked from the start.. love, loss, lust and drama.. well worth the read..
I have read this book three times and still I could read it again. Putting together a Spotify play list so might have to just go round 4. ...️
Beautiful story. Can’t wait do dive into another story.
Team Shane for life!! ...️ I’m so happy I found you on Patreon. Your content is so steamy!!
story is becoming more interesting now can,t wait for upcoming chapters.please please please author update soon.
Good book I love reading it
good book a few errors
Are you still going to do the follow-up, waiting patiently ...