grammatically this story is a 4 out of 5.some minor errors but nothing significant enough that I felt they detracted from this story. my only complaint is that this story doesn't focus on the main protagonist enough.I also feel it would be better off if he told his wife who he's working for, and that he knows what she is and loves her any way.like the choice system wish it would play a bigger role.
I had read this in mtl before... Not a good read, just like those recently publish novel from China... Filled with racism, nationalism, and forced plot... And the story didn't make sense, really...
Damn is this novel good. I wish there are more chapters but this is a novel that I am willing to wait for. And the character development is interesting. :D
What do really expect from this type of story? If it was really good the author would be in a New York apartment going over all his movie and merchandising agreements not writing on Webnovel. That said it's good for what it is. Best Game based story on WebNovel. A Mage that uses Magic revolutionary.
Read all chapters because of the limit free stuff and boy was this bad. Author can’t seem to choose between op mc and balanced mc and switches between these two ideas constantly.
When are you going to finish writing this? Or at least continue writing this? It's been around 3 months since last update. I thoroughly enjoy this book, by far one of my favorites that I have read on Webnovel. The characters are all very well written and fleshed out and the plot is captivating. I love that it bleeds into both worlds and brings some excitement to each.
Fast-paced and average. Sounds like a worse copy of some good novels I like in similar setting/system. His passives is a plot armor that appears when he needs it as well. Only the thing someone else mentioned - that schemes and lies are shown in a unique way - is perhaps something worth reading for, but I am not interested in this atm.My opinion is subject to change in future if I ever decide to pick it up again. But I will pass on it for now. The novel didn't captivate me at all.
You can read it, but only till Chapter 61. The quality of translation went from decent to straight up MTL and whomever is doing the translation works decided to not even bother with the clean up.
writer got me worried hasn't updated in 2 weeks. are you abandoning or on a hiatus? plz come back
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I can only say that this is a godly Comedy ?. MC that's OP in the past ✔️ Reincarnation ✔️ System ✔️ Music ✔️Cultivation ✔️Strong FL ✔️Brotherhood ✔️Comedy ✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️
Can’t follow who is talking half the time and the story seems forced to make it move alongPlus MC told to keep his bloodline a secret yet it seems he tells his brother and sisters Sorry not sure like I said the story you can’t tell who is talking half the time plus the story seems to jump suddenly from one point to another