JackPriper
The strange rituals finally comes to an end, the sorcerers all withdraws. He is already extremely exhausted, closing his eyes to rest.
I read the MTL. It's pretty good, a bit of harem-ish elements but there's no polygamy. Law scenes are slightly unrealistic for dramatic purposes, but definitely a good novel for what normally appears here. Easily the best for this selection.
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this story started strong and intresting but slowly its degraded to what feels like random quest's in a RPG. The most annoying part is the writer wants to give us chapters that are nothing but status updates even for characters you haven't seen for a while or will see for dozens of chapters to where your just asking why you would waste coins or FP on it.the most fun you will have reading is before chapter 500/600 so after that it's up in the air if it's still worth it especially since the annoying status updates seem to increase by then
I really liked this book this review may be biased since I’m a friend of the author but please try it out!!!
While the story captivated my interest and held its own, I couldn't help but draw comparisons to the last book I read, which, in my opinion, surpassed this one. The narrative was engaging, but the previous book had a certain magic that elevated it to a higher level. Despite giving this story a respectable 4-star rating, the characters' designs seemed reminiscent of the earlier read, lacking the innovative touch that would have set them apart. It's not that the characters weren't well-crafted; they just felt a bit too familiar. In the end, the tale was enjoyable, but the shadow of the exceptional previous book loomed large, making it difficult to award a perfect rating. Nevertheless, it remains a commendable effort with room for improvement.
in all honesty this is the first time I have written a review. I love the characters in this story the plot is easy to follow and has a relatable Mc for a fantasy story great work hopefully there are many more chapters to come
As usual, I will shamelessly give my novel 5 stars. I won't say much about the novel because it may end up giving spoilers, but I invite you to give it a chance and if you have any questions, you can leave a comment....
This book had a great potential to become one of the foremost post-apocalyptic novels. But the author is very bad at creating a compelling plot. The characters are 4/5 the world building is 2/5 but the story development and plot is 1/5. The MC dedicate hümsepf to becoming tithe best blacksmith ever. Even though it is an apocalypse setting, people are dying, civilization has collapsed, and he can easily be someone with great ability to be one of the most important foundations of human race. He just ignores them and just keeps grinding crafting levels. Occasionally changing the full load out of everyone orbiting himself. Even though they are pretty useless in the grand scheme of things. He gets kidnapped and enslacedand they decide to wait for him to come back home after escaping his new masters.
I absolutelly love this novel, please don’t drop it and i ll love it for ever, the MC is interesant, skillfull and posses a huge background unlike other vrmmo novels that the MC poor background and only win because dump luck. No cliche so far 10/10................................................................................
I'm enjoying this work .. ..with good approach in character psychology ... Just little confused by world background, I'm having a hard time to imagine it. .. Anyway thank you
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