„Since you want to go through the canyon we will still have to test you, no matter your affinities. You will fight against the two of us. I will not use offensive magic and Daterna won't employ lethal dark magic. I take it you are tamers. Inside this canyon there might not be enough space to employ your beasts therefore they will be excluded from the test.
"Don't talk to me you filth!" Amai said as she looked at Suzuki like a trash
"Because it helps to train." Leek replied, "The top, wristbands, and the boots each weigh about half a ton. If I train whilst wearing it, I'll feel lighter and faster when not wearing it."
The glow around the tiger intensified and obscured its form. After dying down, there appeared a man. Muscular and fit with white hair trailing down and intense gas light blue eyes with one eye in the center of his forehead. Also, he was naked
Now the Queen is the one being sulky. Before her son completely leave the playground, he turned back and run to his mother. Seeing her son walks back towards her, the queen in a good mood. "Sorry mother." He then hugs his mother. "I love mother very much."
"What will happen if the shareholder who Atheist and full of sins with their breaking many taboos agreed the use Arabic letters? what will happen if a lot of apostle and prophet name used in game? well, you can try to guess it easily, it will create a chaos by emergence a lot of muslim, hindus and others religion. and those many taboos breaker will kill anyone that condemn them, then the family of the victim will try got their revenge, when those Atheist killed, their own family will also get revenge for them, then this will become war, the war will never end, many will be killed, the circled of hatred will keep continue and will never end! they! The Atheist with pinnacle power will eventually need to drastic method! they will use Satellite Cannon, Sun Cannon, Super Nuclear Weapon, Deadly Bio Weapon, Cyborg, Super Android, Machine King, Mobile Suit and others dangerous weapon to Exterminate them all!! if the war happen the earth will be Half Destroyed!!" a Strong killing intent can be felt from the goddess body and her hair moving like a strong wind blowing it from below her.
"I am but a simple woman, I love to play and eat. And ..." her eyes lowered as if she realized she didn't know what to say.
I quite like the story and how the main female lead is quite intelligent and start to think how to get back on her feet. I have read all the release in one day and am eager for the next chapters! Thank you for picking up this novel!
Writing Quality ?The first ten chapters were great. If it would have kept the same non-serious Slice of Life story going out would have been a great story. The syntax and spelling is some of the best in this platform. So much so that at first I was confused by the mixed reviews and wondering why it wasn't on a more mainstream platform like Royal Roads rising stars or trending.As it turns out the reason is that start is just a catfish for a dark fantasy romance story that lurks right around the corner. A style that's much more dower and depressing. A real chore to read. It never recovers its tone and style at the start. Slowly it eats away at what you liked about it in the start until you look up, metaphorically speaking, and wonder how you got here from there. Truly a shame. But the depictions of torture and mind control of the love interest. For over thirty chapters as it amateurishly throws female leads at you left and right in total chaos best represents this series and why it isn't going to be going mainstream anytime soon. What on Earth were you thinking? You had such a good plot going. This is what creative writing does when you don't sit in the driver's seat doing outlines for the chapters and the arcs themselves. Storyboarding a chapter before and after you write it to make sure that it's not just enjoyable to read, but you got the tone across you wanted. And doing drafts so the overall product doesn't suck. A comedy of poor writer decisions. Sigh...Story Development ?I don't think I need to say more there, do I?Character Design ? ? ?They were well put together at first.Update Stability ? ? ? ? ?There's over 400 chapters somehow. Probably because you skipped doing quality assurance writing? World Background ? ? ?That lack of planning really shows here. The world-building can be said to be banal and likely written chapter to chapter. When normally you're supposed to write this first. I'll still rate it middling, because most amateur writers have no idea what a Literature Bible is anyway. Even if you pointed them at the Fallout Bible for instance? Some of them might even argue it overkill. ?
it's a very intriguing story with a variety of characters with different goals which are similar to most people if put under similar circumstances.
Writing Quality great ?Updating stability awesome?Story development gets better and better and author provide alternate visual map for the story?Character design female lead is epic!??World background its nice?
I couldn’t read more than the first sentence... the english is really terrible... I don’t read very well english(because i ´m french) and i am quit tolerent with novel english quality but this one is... bad... It need editing like seriously :(