Read first 40 chapters and found it very interesting but author had just been uploading for 1 month so I am stacking until he uploads more than 300 chapters. Hope author doesn't drop this novel really liked it and also upload atleast 3 chapter per day hopefully 4 but will make do with 3
Good story but could be better but the mc is not using his power like the fact that he can gain one skill per day or do to the other dimension he have to see if everything is good or the fact why stop him to create other race why it the situation that create race and him who think what he don’t have and maybe see if he can do other thing whith his system and literally the fact that he know an oracle but guy don’t use it NOOOOO he just skip it there is too much too speak but I think you understand now Author I like the concept but your mc don’t use it he is passive
great read........... and i love it, highly recommended
I think it was Markus who sent his cousin to Asli's warehouse. I am sure of it. I can not wait to read more about their enemies to lovers story
It is a very good read, I might say; it has fewer chapters by now, but the story flows smoothly with a great action-packed description that gives you great visuals (Especially the fight between Navyn and Ceaser).I do hope that during system displays the attributes and other descriptions will be spaced out for easier reading (That is why Writing Quality has 1 star less) Apart from that, the System is unique, better than most that I have seen, and I can see the author is cooking something amazing with it, which might surprise us.The overall story type wasn't new in Webnovel, but most of the time, it was the execution that truly made a good story, and this has a good execution to my taste. Even though I see that he was somewhat using screenplay and movie format in some of his scenes I didn't find it jarring to read or get confused (This is where we have shown where the Titan was with Jack and Naman and then we have flashed back on what happened before then we were back to the scene. Usually it won't come in that order)There was another scene, too, during Jack and Ceaser's fight, but to me, it add layers of good storytelling to a degree. Another thing that I want to add is the realistic situation and the sense of foreboding and helplessness other characters feel. It was a good display. I'm not a fan of too much death, but the fact Carol lost her child just after saving him with the nanny makes me think that the Apocalypse isn't joking around.But I'm more interested in Jack's character development. Will he be a generic arrogant system user who stream roll everything with a grin or be a complex character that we will hate and love? Hopefully, it will be great.
Just wow! Pretty good writing and efforts. Fantastic world built and characters. Got hooked at the first chapter itself. Greed is a lovely character!. Though I suggest to keep each chapter length between 1000-1500 for better flow and consistency.
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lnteresting story . I really want to know more. good job writer . keep it up
bro your story is really good the world building is good and clear the mc is not too op at the beginning which is also good and family this is unique most novel of this type don't have family or don't care about one this has a lot of potential don't drop this
Okay, where do I even start? This novel has EVERYTHING! The main character gets reincarnated, wakes up with a system, and boom—now he's overpowered and ready to take on the world. But wait, he's not your average hero, nope, he's the villain! And he's out for revenge.Every chapter is like:Punching bad guys? Check.Romance? Check.Big brain plans to take over the world? Double check.And don't forget the epic fights that make me want to start throwing punches in the air. ?But seriously, the antihero vibes are real. You’re rooting for the bad guy, but he’s so cool you don’t even feel bad about it. If you like action, romance, and a main character who doesn’t follow the rules, this is it. Just grab your popcorn, sit back, and enjoy the madness.
a historical apocalypse novel! this is new to me.
right away I will say this story has decent world-building and ok story development. but that's it. first of all, reading the first 15 or so chapters is like rubbing sandpaper on your eyes and is the visual equivalent of nails on a chalkboard. excruciatingly slow start, repeating segments that don't add anything, and a general lack of plot development outside of typical world building combines with machine translation quality English to create a unique abomination. to top it off it's maddening that a story can have such decent world-building while making a character so empty I question if the story even needs them. I will attempt to read the remaining chapters while it's free, but genuinely don't think I can. this novel isn't the worst thing ( that goes to a novel that suddenly became one-piece fanfic at chapter 85ish) but I cannot stress enough how mediocre at best this is.