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As the other fans/readers said, it is an amazing book, i also love how the girl gave the boy another chance, even though she was hurt a lot of times, keep it up, author~
Erza Scarlett est une Mage de Rang S de la guilde Fairy Tail, considérée comme étant la plus forte des membres féminins. Un an après la dissolution de la guilde, elle a été nommée en tant que 7ème Maître de guilde de Fairy Tail.Habituellement surnommée Titania, la Reine des Fées, ou plus simplement Titania, elle est également membre de l'Équipe de Natsu et est une ancienne esclave à la Tour du Paradis. Elle est notamment la fille d'Eileen Belserion.Elle est une jeune femme mince et d'assez grande taille, aux cheveux longs de couleur écarlate, descendant jusqu'au milieu de son dos. Ses yeux sont de couleur marron et son œil droit est artificiel, créé par Polyussica, car elle a perdu l'ancien en étant torturée dans la Tour du Paradis. Il est incapable de pleurer.
good set up.. main and side character base properly filled out.. not enough background for world as of yet..
One of my favourite resurrection type of novel. It is not cringy like the others and the story line is flawless. The writing might be long and kind of not that great, but I still have a great time reading it.
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the updating schedule should be changed to 4 days per chapter
Review after 868 chaptersThis is book is fantastic as a lover of history and fantasy this is a unique twist on the story of Merlin. I plan to use in this review the overall pacing, upload/community, grammer and punctuation.#1 Pacing:Personally believe that this book has some fantastic pacing, as a weak to strong genre it showcases a real struggle for Merlin, he has his ups ans his downs and we can feel his struggle throughout the book as he continues life gets that little easier and that little harder. Everything has a purpose and there are long payoffs for those who pay attention. If you like mythology and history, you'll pick up tid bits which you'll really enjoy, many moments left me in a case of picking my jaw from the floor.#2 Upload Schedule and CommunityAvans has a great upload schedule he releases very frequently with usually two a day which is great. He keeps to his promises in regards to bonus chapters for golden ticket ranking and overall ranking pushes.The community is one of the best I've ever encountered, everyone is kind and friendly and the author does monthly quiz's and voucher giveaways in which he personally runs and he's very active in the chat, watching us theorise while he watching with bated breath.#3 Grammar and Punctuation:Throughout the book there is very little in regards to problems, Avans is very on the ball, fixes where possible and everything is just as perfect as you can hope.So to summerize some Pros and ConsProsWorld Building is, in a word, magicalThe magic system is very interesting and easy to understand.The use of Bloodlines is also very unique and special in regards to its use and importance.The pacing is just about right not to fast and not too slowWill leave you wanting more and you will grow with Emery on his journeyConssome of the characters can feel 2 dimensional to begin with but they become fleshed out as the story progressesMany find problems with the romance at the end of the day its not the main focus but its a tool towards Emerys emotional growth and its still important, plus we have fun debates.The cliffhangers are killer, they're great but I hate them.You won't regret reading this book I personally binged the first 110 chapters in one night. I'm sure you will too.
I'm enjoying myself. It's a unique take on the Death Note, which is essentially completely different from the original, at this point. Especially considering its a cultivation novel. People like to quit and rate poorly whenever anything bad happens, but honestly, it's a good novel overall.
i hope Bailey gets willams love. she is great
lovely story
Inconsistent and lacking continuity. It was stated many chapters ago at Elliot had a vasectomy so he couldn't have fathered a baby. The whole family turned on him in a heartbeat without even giving some time to look into it based on the second hand info of a total stranger.
it's awesome, you're doing great author... keep it up
