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The fists of the Abbey Dean and Ning Que clashed.
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nice novel want to read more about it thanks
I do not know whether to call this novel a hidden gem or not, the only thing I am sure of is that I like the moment.I hope the author does not disappoint me, otherwise I will be the first to change my review.
So far so good , but great author are you... a girl by any chance ?,purely out of curiosity ??
I love poems so much, and this one in particular is worded so well, it takes me back to my high schools days, when I’d borrow random books from the library and forget to return them back.
Mantaaaap Bang Bro, Englishnya bagus dan mudah dimengerti. Pertahankan dan perkembangkan skillmu ini. Fighting! Ganbatte! Caiyoo! Merdeka ??????
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Okay so it has been a while since I wrote a review, so take this one with a grain of salt. Some chaps felt short but since they covered the event well, it was fulfilling.The writing quality is good IMO. I am mostly saying that because the sentences are easy to understand. There seems to be a need for mid dialogue punctuations in some sentences, but this is an easy fix.No comments on the stability of updates: As someone who cares about quality more than quantity. But when I say so many chaps on 28th I was like :OThe story development is somewhat fast with a lot of dialogues... But I like it since the characters are portrayed well.Now the interesting part here is the Character Design... The dialogues are set well making it easier to understand the characters.The world background part needs a bit of work here IMO... mostly because it's overshadowed by the dialogues in many chapters. But this mostly depends on how well one can imagine the surrounding. /me secretly screams GIMME MORE SCIENCE IN SCI_FI...
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Good enough grammar. But please give some effort to making sure the paragraphs and conversations are formatted to be readable too.The novel description said the MC was a normal human with no power and got by with wits and determination. I was hopeful that this MC would not be another overpowered idiot.But then the MC was announced as the fiance of a queen in the third chapter which... is something else, haha...And then he defeats half a dozen knights effortlessly with a dual-wielding style he has never used before, analyzed the difference between wood and aluminum with a single glance from the bleachers of the fighting arena, and then later plans and executes a rescue operation without prior experrience, based apparently just on knowledge gleaned from TV and family stories, then goes on to defeat...well, you get the idea.Author...*cries*...your definition of 'powerless' is apparently very different from mine.I'm partial to isekai where the MC's power is just modern knowledge, but give some logical reason how the MC got that knowledge please. If any person can plan a hostage retrieval just from watching TV and listening to grandpa talk about the war years, then this reviewer hopes to learn the violin from watching lindsey sterling on youtube.The plot progression of this novel is great. There is always something to be interested in as the MC introduces the wonders of bombs to a medieval world based on magic.The growing relationships of the MC have some interest as well, though I think giving the MC actual friends rather than people he steamrolls over at the soonest opportunity would heighten interest in the world.The beginning chapters are a bit rough but the format and grammar gets better as the story progresses. Lots of action, good development.All in all, a good read. Good going author!