super good story the character development was amazing i quite like the characteristics of the main protaginist no spoilers to show heee heee heee
Very good novelExcellent MC mindsetI'm really looking foward for it.---------------------------------------------------------//-----------------------------------------------------------------------
I feel like a total m, reading this story ...... But my Rating speaks for itself. I have read a lot of stuff , and through them built up my mental defences , but this story didn't even bother to acknowledge them and rammed straight past them. Despite having a system , the story is serious , fulfilling and worryingly funny at times.** : author is a savage.
Giving myself a shameless review guys but I just hope that all readers love this story... BTW this is a mtl Novel I found and just translated it cuz I liked it and want others to find this gem book........ So if u enjoy add to library and continue reading... After 50 chapter I will slow down to 2 chapter per day guys
Can you expect other than greateness from our beloved and favourite author neha_!?!?!???Anything neha_ writes is purely magical! Right now I am addicted to Jun Lan and My Beautiful Commander also written by this amazing human being! ????
wow amazing story .......???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Iam dropping this book because I don’t get enough rating and cheers hard for me to translate works with out readers supporting it............
I'd probably give my own story here 3.7-4-ish stars, writing quality has a few past/present tense mistakes, some writing errors and confusing sentences, and overly repeated words, but is mostly clear and 'enjoyable' to read. I think I did an okay job on the action, but I don't have enough experience with that to tell.There will only be one chapter for this. So obviously 5-stars.I only gave myself 3 stars for story development, as it's too short a story to really test any natural/interesting developments, developed as expected, maybe did an above-average job explaining things.I personally found the characters fun, and was somehow able to give them slightly different personalities in such a short story, nothing too multilayered. Can't really brag, but I think I made some fun, fairly well-written characters.I had lots of details fleshed out for the plot, world, city names, history, blah blah that didn't really fit in. Given how short the story is, I'm not going to be too harsh on myself over not being super detailed. Though I will say I should've described the fauna/landscape of the area and at least attempted to depict the alien world outside of a single building.Thanks for reading my review of my own story, now take off your pants and I'll give you a cookie.
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-Simple and easy to understand power system-Dynamic story telling w/o much fillers and lull points in between arcs-multiple chpters a day-ang great translation(if any)All in all, a great read to past the tym w/o frustration or annoyance.
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one star 'cause it was interesting but a fan fic should Always be free , I don't Care if you write a PayPal or a Link for money Support it's alright but locking the chapter as a fanfic is ridiculous, You choose to translate it, WE didn't force you, By translating it you choose to bear the work and we would have given support