Ps: Some info- This story will have two main character... Both with different circumstances but related.Also, don't worry, the story won't get confusing because of them :pOne Mc will be a one woman man while the other will have a harem. Further info will be released later
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Great but wouldn't actually read it here.. Wuxiaworld.com for those of you who wish to suport the translator and their claim to their work. For those who don't give a poop it's a wonderful story with a greedy MC that makes me wish i could find money as easily as this guy. Grows to be powerful while being a conman that doesnt even spare those who can easily kill him with one finger.
another webnovel scam, theyve been poping up alot lately where the free chapter are properly translated but then the rest is bad mtl translation
Really good read at first but after Tang Ge left, it became gradually worse. What I dislike the most is how MC is treated in his school, where he's basically their slave. He got to tank all of the attack (even though someone got a turtle contracted beast mind you). He's got to do all the cooking (Although he accepts that, the other actually thinks it's a RIGHT. Even the teacher that ask the other student to go in seclusion EXCEPT for MC because he's got to do the food)
Its so cool and original. I love the idea of a wisp cultivator and the best is that its not a reincarnation and the wisp os intelligent. There is no long vjapters about learning that bore you. Just the balance it need to keep it interesting and logical for the plot. Its a must read in a point of view. I just hoping the author will continue. Ps: no harem.
Now webnovel start to understand what we want to read, thanks for the novel, now I need the raw.140characteres 140 characters paralelepipedo
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AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO REALLY READ FIRST CHAPTER???????I see 16 people voting 5 stars, and that made me think, "oh this must be an intressting novel". And I am now writing a review after reading 1 chapter. And usually I dont do that. But holy cow! I am so confused! Help me anyone who actually read or still reading this novel!The following notes are taking from the running text. The reason i number them all up liks this is because the very first chapter is CONFUSING. You want to captivate your writer not confuse them. All the notes below are taking from your running-text ( no paragraph divisioning )1.When Beta was only 2 years old, he was already made to help dissect corpses. One year later, on his third birthday, he was called into an unknown room. ( Beta is now forced as a 3 year old child to fight a death match against Gamma)2. "Gamma wins. Leave the room to the left side."3. "Your opponent got your eyes (Betas eyes), and you got his. Your eyes were better than his, so that's what he won in that battle."4. "The thought of suddenly having someone else's eyes in his head shocked him greatly(Betas Point of view). Even worse is the fact that he'd lose even more parts of his body almost made him go insane. "5. Beta leaves the room after being revived, and his father says = "He's an incredible child. Beta is much more intelligent than the other kids so far. I truly wonder how he will turn out to be. We should prepare more samples for him to fight against. If he simply beats everyone to death the moment he meets them, we won't get our desired result." WHAT? - Pretty sure Beta were the one WHO DIED?6. The next day his father called him so he walked along the corridor, surprised that the door to the martial arts training field is still there. As soon as he arrived in his father's room he started looking around. He saw nothing but the table that he wakes up on once he dies, but this time with an addition. There's a person on the table. He looked at his father inquiringly. -"Beta, today you will learn about the art of changing your body. You will take this boys arms and take them as yours. One step at a time of course. We'll start with the left arm today so get ready to first cut his and then yours off."WHAT - Writer you are already completely writing something else.9. "The time has finally come, he has to cut off his arm." this here is a weird sentence. -WHat do you mean the time has finally come? after 1 week? even though Beta is the only one who died? Whos arm is he cutting?Writer. feel free to hate and comment my text. But my advice is, sit down, revise your own text before you post your chapter. Or ask a friend who is good at english and read your text. This is just for your own good. Because real english plublishers will ask an editor to rework your text.
I love this story one of if not the best Warhammer story here so pls update soon other than that eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Third time is indeed the charm. To all those who waited for 4 months with me without losing hope, I toast to you.(MHoH translator has told they'll be doing this next :) )