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looks like a hunie pop but without the candy crush part .........................................................................................................................
World background has been described very well along with the character design. The writing quality so far has proven to be of high standard as there is no grammar errors I picked up on. Few questions though - Will this be fast paced quick growth mc (what I prefer)? What is the update schedule like currently because it doesn’t show any number? As long as you don’t have any other things going on I would love to see a daily or more upload schedule. Overall though great story I’m looking forward to where this is going and keep up the great work!
This is my hero academy 2.0 that all i will say….,,,,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.l……,.”.l,.l,ll,,.ll,,,ll.,ll.,ll,,ll,.ll,.l,,ll?.!,,?ll
I wanted to like it. and it's not like it's bad or anything, it's just far from what it could be. The mc got a pretty op pathon day one but never uses it. I think it was used only once or twice by chap 70 even though there's so much that it could be used for. instead, the mc is so reliant on the system for anything and everything, even stuff that his own power could be used for. This is supposed to be some top notch gamer but in his new world, all he does is basically use the wiki and a walkthrough. The mc needs to think for himself rather than have an all-knowing system spell every little thing out for him.--- Possibly spoiler below---back to his starting path, it's so op if he even thinks about it for a second. He can find literally anything he wants but instead uses the system for everything he could be doing himself. locate enemies nearby? his path could do it but uses the system instead. find an enemies weak point? that's something that his power could do. find a good place to cultivate? find some good treasure? find the beast core? find the best spot to hit the hammer while smithing? literally anything to do with locating something, he should be able to do with his path, yet he has the system to do all of that and more anyways. what's the point of giving him op powers if he literally never uses it?and look, maybe he finally decides to later on. who knows? he hasn't used it by chap 70 so anything else is just too late. too bad because it could have been much better
I have completely fallen in love with this story. The plot line is so interesting and fun to read. I like reading from the different POV cause it helps me understand the characters better.
I live cultivation novels read a ton. This one started out good too. But after 650 or so chapters I gave up on it. Unlike most cultivation novels as the story goes on the MC just keeps getting weaker and weaker and more stupid. First he cannot move up anymore. Then he cripples his soul. Then he cripples his physical body. Then he cannot use his summons. Then he cannot use his cultivation till understands chaos. Then when understands chaos he destroys every other power he had and all his meridians, so he cannot even use the chaos power he has. By that point I just gave up just stupidity by that point.
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The opening chapter was so well written that you can't help but continue reading.I have read quite a couple of V.R. stories here on wn, so I'll look forward to seeing how the author will add his own taste and make the story stand out.All the very best, dear author?
This story is not suitable for human consumption. I do not understand why the author has refused to hire an editor. I assume it is because of insatiable greed as he can't bare to part with a single penny to ensure his work is understandable. Reprehensible. Furthermore, the author's personality at the end of the chapter really bugs me, constantly complaining about ranking or uploading chapters that just say there will be no chapter etc.I dropped it in the mid 90s and checked later chapters and the grammar did not improve. Concept is good and I should rate it higher in that regard but the writing is repetitive, grammar is trash and chapters contain little to no actual content, making this a giant waste of time that I can't consciously give anything more than one star.Readers, do not waste your time!
yeah yeah i know ... this novel deserves more than 3 star but if you have read Trafford's Trading Club then you will realize that this novel is just a cheap imitation of it with some chapter not making anysense at all