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Hearing stuff like the “The River flows on the east for thirty years and ebbs on the west side for another thirty, one’s fate will constantly be changing. Don’t look down on the poor and bully them.” Taken so seriously is a mind f*ck. It’s supposed to be a gag or a joke in other novels yet reading it for the first time here, where its supposed to be heartfelt is a hella dxperience
Certainly like how the Bulgarian Proverb goes "you can't have both the d*ck in the *ss and soul in the heaven"
I remember waiting for the weekly chapters…look how they massacred my boy
It's good and it has a lot of comedy
Don't Focus on others opinions
Read it you won't regret it
Newbie here, LOTM?? SS??
If you’re trying to make me hate the mc well congrats you’ve done it! Dropped.
It's from my little Akk, So of course I'm ganna give it 5 stars
help me he has me at gun point.
I love it! Idk why people dont like IT. PLS make my dreams come true and never drop!
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It's my first time reading this type of novel and honestly, it's captivating how the Author narrates the story with perfection it is excellent how the author has described the real situation some of the events were informative Keep up the good work author
I must say this is an amazing novel some things here and there could be better(Example: Lake having to play the playboy character that his sister designed for him and him breaking things off with Evelyn. Even if you don't want her to be the female lead at least make them friends or something with no romance on both sides.). But overall, this is one of my favourite novels. Other than the upper points I mentions the characters,plot,system and world is amazing. I hope if you can take take my suggestion into consideration and PLEASEEE post more chapters.
The syntax and formatting are almost as bad as MTL. I can't read it. Takes me right out of the story. Another thing I noticed is that instead of role-playing each character the writer makes it incredibly cliche. Young master cliche. It's just not very good. Keep at it, man. Get a development editor and some proofreaders. Use Google Docs and Grammarly.
Translator is totally blowing it. They pad the word count by duplicating chapters. Chapter 79 if IRC is half the chapter and a copy and paste of the first half to "finish" the chapter. Chapter 82 is a total duplicate of an earlier chapter. Dropping this piece of garbage translation like the dumpster fire it is.I blame the translator for this 90% for the fraud and Webnovel 10% for not fixing it after it's gone on over 7 days.Quality control, quality what?
