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This is a kingdom building story where the MC transmigrates into a world with future knowledge. The world appears to be almost identical to an online game the MC plays, which means he knows shortcuts and important NPCs to contact. The system is gamelike, but not overplayed by the author. There is no harem and only one real love interest.Spoiler (I finished the raws): As mentioned, this is a kingdom building story where the MC uses his foresight, brain, and gathers smart people around him to establish an empire. The path is bloody with kingdom/army warfare, strategies, alliances, and luck (MC is very lucky for a reason that you will find out later). Overall, not a masterpiece, but I enjoyed reading most of the story. There's a few slow/boring parts in the middle and the author never really explains why there is a game of the world on earth which was a bit disappointing. The ending was good, but didn't feel like a real complete ending, more like the ending to an arc.
an unusual beginning for such stories, I hope the author will not lose his chance to write a great novel (and will not hit a jumping cultivation), well, it's over I wanted it to remain free:p
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1 love this one it was me dieing laughing, already recommended to a few friends, hope the creator has other books...........................
Really interesting so far, the world is somewhat unique but also has enough common elements to make it easy to understand. The protagonist is fairly interesting as well as the somewhat different direction of the story. The only two flaws are some spelling mistakes and that some pf the charecters are cliche’s.
thought it was very good and loved it i prefer this site better than ww because they have way to many ads and this site is more convenient then haveing to go to a new link after each chapter
So, I normally don't leave reviews, but I was so disgusted by the stupidity of just the 1st half of the opening chapter, I had to rant....Anyways, imagine a circle about 10 paces acrossNow, imagine that circle is A KILOMETER awayGot it pictured? Can you even see the circle anymore?Ok, now imagine looking out that circle a kilometer away and noticing enough details of the heavens to recognize not just that there are 2 suns, but that they are different sizes and brightnessesCause looking thru a giant, unmagnified, tube is so fucking useful for observation I don't care if it's only the start, I don't care if it gets better, this author should be castrated to prevent such stupidity from being passed on to our future gene pool
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The story is pretty good. One of the better ones among Chinese Novels. But it has its own collection of problems. Translation : It is readable, but many sentences have lost their meaning among translation. Some words are misinterpreted, while others are in wrong place. I am not sure, whether it's translation error or writing error. For example, the story loves to use the term devilish to describe anything above average. Devilish talent, devilish beast, devilish tongue. Honestly, the terms should have been monstrous and not devilish. Similarly, I remember reading a chapter ( when he goes to Murong Xus family, before the five talents come.) The world servile has been used. MC looked at him in servility or something. Once again, wrong verb. MC didn't give a **** about him. Their are several such instances where wrong terminology has been used. From around chapter 400-500, divine weapons and divine dao has been replaced with Supreme Dao and weapons, which is causing confusion. Then their is the cultivation level, many times the levels have been changed or mixed. Where Profound should be used, they have used Perfect and so on. Plus cultivation level is not described clearly, especially the Mysterious Exquisite level. Anyway, talking about characters. I am taking western novels such as those by Sanderson, Martin, archer and Rothfuss. Although an unfavorable yardstick, it's a wasted effort if I compare CN with CN novels. It's okay. His aspirations are rather vague and sudden. They lack motivation and are extremely forced. His love life is sudden. How can three meetings turn into a life long love commitment, is something I can't fathom. The world building... Difficult to comment. Until ch 650 we have just gone over the Human and Xuan Yuan Mound. Several forbidden areas are still left. Despite that, from what I can see, the world building is rather lack luster. The politics is vague and completely depended in that regions owner and his backing. The economy is not even mentioned. The power division is also rather confusing. I don't expect something of Martin's level, but at least something?
Story is great.Translation after chapter 40 S*CKS.The translation ruined it all. Use Go*ogle Translate or ChatG*T to get a better translation or to edit the chapters
The author abandoned the novel and wrote a rushed ending when the novel didn't seem close to ending at all. Very disappointing.............................