Not Read but i hope it will be better not like the grammar of the 1st review of the author................................................................140....................................................................
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first review!!!still need a lot of work in story building, chapter length also need some works. grammar is excellent, i haven't found any big grammar problem. let's see how far you'll make the story, goodluck!
The story is fresh. Though it started as a presentation of a teens perspective at the start but as the story progresses, the perspectives grow deeper and deeper. The more you read, the more entrigued you become. Since it's hard to anticipate what will happen next. The story teller used technique that brings you to the mind of a character. You cannot wait when and how the lives of the characters will entertwine. Though Aiden is the main character, but the other characters are equally colorful. It's exciting when the character of the vilain will be finally revealed. Though it's too early to judge the technical ability of the author but he is very effective in presenting introspection which gives depth and color.
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This novel is definitely a page turner! The way the author paints a picture in our minds is absolutely amazing. I was able to imagine everything perfectly. This story is written perfectly and is definitely a must read!
A good good fantasy with giga chad Mc this you jam, from the first it hooks you and make you read more, the characters and world-building is so smooth overall a must read
The story is quite refreshing. Even tho this kind of genre is not my type. I think Overall the character is a tsunerde.If possible fix the grammatical problems
Interesting plot, creative idea, well executed, and overall a very captivating read! :)FilerFilerFilletFillerFiller FilerFilerFilletFillerFiller
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