The bus crosses the transparent bridge and from below, it looks like a flying wingless plane. The awful sight immediately overflows the bus with panic and screams of terror. Mabel looks at the bottom of the cliff through a window and sees a violent stream, which only adds to the cocktail of horrors they're in. Worse, the tailing monster leaps onto them, aiming to break the bridge with its momentum and make everybody falls straight into the vicious water. This effectively cuts Cristina's lethal stare, making its final blow a formidable threat. But few seconds before achieving its goal, a large serpentine pillar of water shoots up the sky from the stream below and strikes it in the neck like a brutal, full-blown uppercut. The impact pushes it back until it crashes on the brink of the cliff, with its head rolling on the ground like a supersized bowling ball.
Person 2:"Master said, that w should crush them when they think, that they have won and lower their defenses, you clearly know, that only then we have a real chance and they actually already lowered their defenses by sending of their main army to the main land. But the master thinks, that they can lower it a little bit more."
thinking about all the things that he had to keep secret for now could only be sad because it was quite complicated to limit himself in so many things, but even seeing the profound plants that he had in front, if someone came in and saw them it would take a great surprise, because in just a matter of 6 days these seemed to have matured for almost 1 year.
"Uta, take back the coal with you. Now." Sanil ordered with clenched fists, grinding his teeth.
After that, Volya looks at the room that he occupied. The room quite spacious with one wardrobe to put all of his clothing, one chest to put his book, a study desk, one chair, mirror, and one bedroom where his ferret is sleeping peacefully. Even with those items of furniture already in place, there still a lot of space there.
"What do you want me to do?" Ambre asks the redhead.
And to that, the office of birth registrations was busy trying to shut down hackers who tried to pry for her origin.
[Do you want to claim ownership of this space bag]
This story starts slow, but getting better with each chapter. The main character is good, and the background characters isn't forgotten. Everyone has their own role in a special way. Worldbuilding is solid and the story flow is smooth. This story slowly unravel mysteries behind every character as it progressed forward.Conclusion : This a good read. The 1st story that includes almost every tags you can think of (supernatural, sci-fi, slice of life, action, adventure,comedy, tragedy, etc.) and the author still did a good job writing it. This story reminds me of Gintama.Rating : 10/10
426: 272 Ch. So far, the novel has significant flaws. If it could be summarized in simple steps, things have been as follows:1.He finds a woman he wants to brainwash.2.The place where he is undergoes a change (caused by the appearance of a treasure for some reason).3.He decides to stay within the safety of his refuge.4.By sheer luck, treasures he didn’t bother to seek come to his doorstep effortlessly.5.He creates a new creature with insane abilities (something he doesn’t fully exploit).This cycle repeats again and again throughout the story so far.The Protagonist's AttitudeHe’s entirely afraid of getting involved in treasure hunts and fights. If fights do occur, the MC never fights directly but uses his clones instead (a typical case of fearing that stepping out of the sect will result in a stronger cultivator killing him for no reason). The protagonist mentions that in his past life, he was an otaku/hikikomori, which heavily influences his decision-making.I can’t help but compare him to Rudeus from Mushoku Tensei, a character with a similar background: someone with no purpose in society is transported to another world. But unlike our beloved bug-lover, Rudeus undergoes character development, stepping out of his comfort zone to face the new reality he finds himself in.#HateTurtles...BrainwashingIn this story, there isn’t just one form of brainwashing; in my view, there are almost two sequential types. The first occurs when the MC triggers love in the love interests. The second comes with the “infection” of the protagonist’s unpleasant attitude, which erases the individual qualities of the love interests over time.The protagonist is like an amorphous blob that absorbs and destroys everything it touches.I’m not entirely against brainwashing. Using any “golden finger” to survive in a brutal new world is logical. However, the previously mentioned changes are what irritate me.LuckAs mentioned in Step 4, the protagonist is excessively lucky to the point of exhaustion. He doesn’t have permanent enemies—just walking money bags delivered to his door. Those annoying characters? Remember the guy chasing the "beauty" or that relative (cough cough father) or other entity opposing the MC's union with said beauty? Well, if they exist, wait for their death because they’ll never harm the MC. It feels like the author simply eliminates them, so don’t expect plots or anything like that.Brief Mention of PositivesThe story seems to show glimpses of solid world-building.Kingdom-building elements are relatively well-executed.Fights are decent. Like sugar-free soda—more or less satisfying.Finally, other sources mention that the protagonist’s character changes slightly later on and that some positive aspects of the story improve. However, as the saying goes, “Seeing is believing,” said the blind man.I hope they keep releasing more chapters. It’s not the best novel I’ve read, but I’m curious about the new bugs and waifus that will appear.Sincerely,A man who enjoys harems.
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