for a first time it's great. I just didn't like how after he learned there were bigger dangers in the world that haven't happened yet but could. he made a vow to jump straight in. also funny how he showers so much in one day lol
Good Novel worth reading.Now I am Filling up space.Now I am Filling up space.Now I am Filling up space.Now I am Filling up space.Now I am Filling up space.
what can i say? this is something new. it has life, emotion, mystery and a lot to take in. In just a few chapters, its making me love it more. i want more more more more pls
The plot would be somewhat interesting if not for the atrocious grammar, the rather apparent lack of editing, character decisions that make no sense, and how forced everything is.
So this was definitely an interesting story which can attract those who play these types of games such as myself and I enjoy how the author was able to capture the feeling like the odd one out around many other experienced players. Sadly, while the current story is very interesting, it is riddled with grammatical errors, bland descriptions, and a severe lack of emotions. There is much, and I mean much to be desired from the novel as it has a great plot but it isn't executed very well. Taking some time to re-read your chapters and rewrite them will definitely increase the popularity of your story. Writing isn't that easy, but I know you can improve!
It's good to see an anthology amongst a sea of really long novels. The author keeps the stories crisp and short. The 1st story shows that there is a reason its called glamor, peeps. Good work.
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I like the novel, but I need a table with character names associated with player names. I have always been bad with names. If you can also work in associations within each chapter that would be great for me!
Chinese name: 我能提取熟练度 ("I can extract mastery/proficiency" or smth like this)Status: Ongoing, 1021 chaptersIt's not a best novel here, but it suits my taste, so I'll try read it further and write a comment here. For now, I recommend this to everyone
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