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What a wonderful little novel. Please read my review if you have the time.It is translated excellently (“swordsmen of eradication/termination” is about the coolest name translated from Chinese I’ve seen on Quidan). I’ve only read until chapter 32 and I’ve already read enough to write a sincere review. If you are picky about what you read, please browse through this review, as it will probably help you decide.[TLDR]: The novel has depth of character, an intriguing world background, and portrays the moral ambiguity of its human-like characters. The translation, up to the latest chapter I’ve read, is at the level of native English, which is much better than other novels on this site/app. Plus, wits over brawn always wins the day for readers like me.[HIGHLIGHTS]: The characters do not follow some shallow sense of justice, and act like real human beings. That means they will be dark, selfish, and exploit people whilst also showing kindness and loyalty towards others, etc. Reminds me strongly of the characters in Trafford’s Trading Club (ppl who initially seem like trash but are in fact acting for the sake of others, etc)The world, up to the latest chapter I’ve read, is intriguing and has unconventional aspects such as mystics and decently complicated political warfare. This world has unique elements, much like the world in Throne of Magical Arcana (music + church vs magicians/scientists). The main character is a perceptive planner/schemer/diplomat type. Reincarnation is tricky and does not make him OP. He works hard in a harsh world and should be considered a generally mature person. This novel is one of the best translated on Quidan. Thank you very much for your hard work! What would we readers be doing without you guys..?[RECOMMENDATIONS]: Again, if you find that this novel suits your tastes I recommend you check out these titles on Quidan:- Throne of Magical Arcana - Trafford’s Trading ClubThey are somewhat alike to Kingdom’s Bloodline in terms of the amount of thinking expected of the reader, multifaceted human characters, and creatively unconventional world building. If you are a particular type of reader, you will likely enjoy all 3 to varying degrees.NOTE: To those rating 1 star because you are angry about spirit stones... if you truly like these novels... nobody is forcing you to read on Quidan you know..? (^-^)!Thank you for reading my review. I put a lot of time into writing it because I think sharing this novel with others is worth the time expended. ...Pls I need your upvote :P
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Great book just reviewing it again, I love the story. So far likrable character, fun idea for a system definitely a must read! I all can say is not enough chaps
First of all, lessen the harem parts and more on the cooking parts. I just started to read and the story 30+ below are quite good, better keep that up.
Well.… i read Up to chapter 10 and what can i say? My rating speaks for itself. 99% of the time a trial read novel is rubbish. Would not recommend for people Over the age of 2.
I just got a bit confused with the names ? but I love the characters, for a bl novel this is pretty good because it did not just focus on romance but in music as well. Good job author ❤️❤️
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One of the few gaming novels out there with the MC taking a magic route instead of warriors/thief so i had high hopes for it. However, there is too little description that the story seems all over the place. It seems to me that the author has the image in his head but somewhat fails to transfer that into his writing. I don't need massive info dumps but the lack of details during battle as well as the surrounding area makes it hard to imagine what is going on. That in turn doesn't draw me into the story because i can't picture it. It is still early so perhaps that will improve. I also hope we learn more about the world, real and in game. We don't know anything about the MC aside from the fact that he works in a company with beauties and a friend and that he is good at his class in a game to pay for his sister's medical bills. right now, this is the type of novel you read if you got nothing else to read. or you skim through it because the little descriptions doesn't draw you in enough. i hope this improves because this does show potential.
It has a good starting point and might even have a chance to explode in the future, but there are too many grammatical errors, etc. Of course, I am not good at it too but it would've been better if it was good enough, at least where you don't find it hard to read.I hope the author will find an editor but you can also use this to hone your writing skills. Good luck!
Wtf? to the forest, sees food stall, bought it, got praised, hard to sell T———————————>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>pew… pew pew.
Yah untuk lebih jelasnya sih ane juga kagak bisa diskripsiijnya, cman buku ini enak dibaca kok meski awal2 ane kurang paham apa yg diceritain, wkwkwkTapi sefara keseluruhan mantap kok. Wemoga bisa bikin ceritq yg lebih bagua lagi ya gan, dan sukses selalu
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