Shamelessly rating my own novel :PHey guys I just started writing Apex System and this is my first novel so I would appreciate both good and bad reviews as I want to improve as I continue this novel.Anyways that's all for now. Peace out -King
I cant say im a fan. I found this book lackluster at best. The MC has this strange lack of concern for his lackies, and their characters are as flat and dead as paper. The lackies are also very willing to throw their lifes away by following the impulsive desisions and orders of the "village chief". I could understand it if these people are genuine NPCs with no thoughts of their own, but if so, i can only imagine the boring future of this novel. I will probably not continue this novel.
I've enjoyed this story a lot thus far. The story is coming together nicely and the characters are all enjoyable. I look forward to what comes next
Hey potatoes! What happened to the regular updates dude? Its been awhile since the last chapter and i wanna see if crimson mist gets revenge on that baroness and if he can get his little sister in at the sect .. dont chuck it in without a reasonable response atleast, because the story is just getting good .. ** all the best either way my friend you have a talent for story telling and hopefully its still with this storyline thanks again ?
It's would be a good novel, if not for Mary Sue-like Main Heroine. Even right now, I can hardly think of a more hateful person than of her. It would be so much better, if just she died after first mention about her.I just f***** hate her. (I know it's all subjective and s***, but go to hell "writer".)P.S.It's really dumb practice to attribute the merits of translators to a novel. Most of the time, it not deserve it.
first of all; thank you for translating this novel!So far i am really hooked with this plot, although there aren‘t that many chapters yet i can already invision how nice this novel will turn out.Worth a read!
op grandpa(wolf mc) + twin personality + innocent personalitytwisted personality + knowledge of future events + unfair life = the brighter the light the bigger the shadows(ep 25)
from the first twenty chapters, it clear that not much planning went into writing this. the MC gets a second chance goes three years back in time. he was a professional gamer yet he is rattled by the death of an npc, which doesn't make sense. there is no mention of using his future knowledge to gain an advantage. there isn't much depth to characters yet. his reincarnation is brushed past and the MC doesn't react much to it. not much world building and background to speak of. on the other hand, the translation quality is great and the writing is very fluid.all in all, a somewhat generic but fun read for when you have nothing to do.
I like the premise. So I'm gonna go read the raws. Completely finished it. 425 chapters complete. The story is finished. It was ok. I actually felt a little emotional at the end. But I wish they could explain it a little better and not rush it. But overall a good read, to kill time. ??????????????????
I love Eastern fantasy story thats why im very thankful to find this ??? hope it update more ..thank you author for a lovely story hope youll continue it till the end
Waste of time and effort. As soon as the tournament arc comes it's like a completely different author takes over. Cliches and a complete lack of effort in utilizing the "system".
i don't know why this novel is slipping through the ranking. this is best in all aspect. guys are you not giving enough powerstone???the chac of ai hui is one of the best i have ever seen. and the world design is over the top