I enjoy the smart MC. and hiw je slowly understands thé bosses plans. Though there are too Mans battues without enough real lire interactions
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Nice cover and also the summary is great. The content describes the characters well and reading this book is really fun, you won't get bored! The chapters are a bit long, but in this case its pretty nice, great job author!
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I enjoyed reading your novel, but the story in the end of chapter 2 was cut, haha. But im still proud of you i like the plot twist of your story, Im satisfied on how you make the story mysterious in the end of the chapter. Im still curious on how hannah takes care of marc because of the injuries he has. Despite that, i kinda love your novel i want to read more friend!!???
Honestly, I love the ingenuity and newness of your storyline. It’s like a fresh, fantasical take on very familiar issues and it makes it easier to relate with the characters. I like the pacing and your overall tone and delivery, but I think you need to work a bit on your grammar construction and punctuation. Asides from that, this is a truly promising story and I think you’re doing an amazing job!
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Book is good although some parts confuse me. Author i will like to get your reply for it Age system of different species. This really have many holes like elves have 3 times the human age but if you see it in more practical way doesn't it seem like elves are 3 times slower than human in all things. Like if 30 human years is considered average for becoming adept wizard, so it will take 90 human years for elves to do it. This really confuses me and 32 years is 13 years old girl , bro even if she doesn't physically seem 32 years but mentally she will be 32 and if you make 32 years naive then doesn't it mean she is dumb and slow compared to humans .Author i will really like to hear your explanation
although it looks like some paragraphs are missing and the story is too fast but it's a good read
If you're kind enough, please leave an honest review. Your reviews will help me improve the story. If you have any problems with my way of writing or [of] the story itself, no matter how harsh they are, please tell so - so that I can fix them. And if you have any suggestions, I won't mind following them so that I will be able to improve. [Chapter 30: REVIEW] The pace is a little slow as I prioritize (World Building) and (Character Building), especially of volume(1), where it focuses on MC - adapting to his new world. I tried to make the story a little better in the second volume, but it - of course, still has (World Building) for the knights, mages, and adventurers. And if you have read far enough up to Ch.30, you would have already realized that I mainly focus on action and comedy, character development already comes with it, and the 'slice of life' element is always in there. Easier to say, if you like this kind of genre to have a comedic blend, then I guess you would like it - but that's only my opinion, read it for yourself to find out.[Notes:] Please be considerate as I'm not really that good of a writer, which I know much for myself. Lastly, if you ever like the story, do vote and put it on your collection. Every time their number increases, it's a great feeling.
Interesting premise with a good writing quality. The pacing is also good, not too fast or slow. The world building is also detailed enough for easier visualization, but what I liked the most were the character interaction. I have only read about 7 chaptere, but kudos to the author for doing a great job.Overall, 10/10. Will come back for more chapters when it’s about 50 or so ^^